Reviews for The Ambush
Guest chapter 5 . 11/3/2013
Me likey
Mercs2Girl chapter 5 . 8/12/2010
dun dun dahhh
Mercs2Girl chapter 4 . 8/12/2010
AHAH Fiona's response...hehehe
Mercs2Girl chapter 3 . 8/11/2010
hmmmmm I dunno if Chris is...if you're into killing main characters off...hehehe.
Mercs2Girl chapter 1 . 8/11/2010
Not bad. Some formatting issues though...

When you have someone different talking, you should start a new line.

ie

"Damn it's hotter than hell out here." an Allied officer complained.

"Well you're the one who wanted to be on the gun."

see what I mean?

Sounds good though :)