|Reviews for The Ambush|
| Guest chapter 5 . 11/3/2013
| Mercs2Girl chapter 5 . 8/12/2010
dun dun dahhh
| Mercs2Girl chapter 4 . 8/12/2010
AHAH Fiona's response...hehehe
| Mercs2Girl chapter 3 . 8/11/2010
hmmmmm I dunno if Chris is...if you're into killing main characters off...hehehe.
| Mercs2Girl chapter 1 . 8/11/2010
Not bad. Some formatting issues though...
When you have someone different talking, you should start a new line.
"Damn it's hotter than hell out here." an Allied officer complained.
"Well you're the one who wanted to be on the gun."
see what I mean?
Sounds good though :)