|Reviews for Unfettered|
| Food chapter 4 . 3/22/2014
Pleease do more ginhiji fanatics! Your lemons were naughty and yummy! *nosebleeds* one request: I wanna see gin lick Hijikata's ass hole. -pervy intentions- awesome stories by the way!
| G chapter 4 . 9/5/2013
STILL GRINNING AFTER READING THIS THREE-IN-ONE-MASSIVE-PWP-FEST of a chapter xD the image of Gin-san's burnt balls did flash through my mind in the beginning which made me giggle, as did that sentence about "being forced to do the equivalent of watching hardcore gay porn." HAHAHHA OH HIJIKATAAAA. No but the smut was good, steamy but with your particular attention to detail as well imo :) i guess that makes it less... porny? hahahaha
There isn't a lot of romantic development I have to say, they seem to jump into sexytimes and loveydoveyness slightly abruptly? I'm not too into romantic schmoopiness/sappiness but a bit of mutual pining or something might have been nice ;) Anyhoo I gotta say I like the fighting scenes a lottt! Love the spells (is it cringeworthy that I find them really cool) and your way with words :) I've never actually watched Loveless so I don't know how similar the manner of speech is, but I thought it was very creative. And badass ;) Can I also mention how glad I am that you made Hijikata the Fighter instead of Gin-san because its so much more interesting that way, and a powerless uke!Hiji would've made me wanna punch something.
Still can't believe you wrote ten pages of smut I am so so proud. I only giggled twice at the unsexy (burnt balls and gay porno) bits so I guess its a good sign! I am definitely pleasantly surprised and impressed :D
| Varia no Shizue chapter 4 . 8/27/2013
I really liked this. I thought Hijikata and Gintoki were perfectly in character, I could totally feel the tension between the two :D
| Panda Master X chapter 4 . 7/20/2013
Wahahahah! This is so good! I can't believe you mixed in loveless with gintama! It just made everything even more hot!
| sessho ryu chapter 4 . 3/10/2013
This story and this chapter (especially lemon #nosebleed) is...WAOW...SUGOI NE!
I hope you're going plan to make new story Ginhiji (or continue this story).
I want more
ps: sorry for my bad english
| TheCourtsJester chapter 4 . 2/12/2012
*blushing* I loved this story. You did such a wonderful job~3 I wish I could write like you :)
| Treasure Family chapter 4 . 2/12/2012
I love it. Great job.
| Ducks R Evil chapter 4 . 11/19/2011
OMG! i loved this story! especially the plotline
the whole concept could be a little more planned out, like there could actually be a reason for those fights, and the fighter could actually fight with swords instead of words, and such an awesome plotline should be longer but after i read this, i couldn't stop thinking about it
could you do a sequel?
| Kid chapter 4 . 9/13/2010
IT'S OVER? ARE YOU SERIOUS? SO FAST?
Okay first off, THAT WAS AWESOME! Until it got to the last chapter. B: It kind of got a bit PWPish to the end. And OOC. BUT IT WAS GOOD
YES THE LEMONS WERE GOOD.
I'M ALSO REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY SORRY I NEVER SENT THIS IN EARLIER. I FORGOT! D: D: D: D:
I WILL FAV THIS. WHEN IT IS NOT 2 AM. I NEED TO GO TO BED. WILL BE NITPICKY TO YOU LATER.
| StardustDreams chapter 4 . 9/9/2010
N-nice smut! ;DDD
I loved how they were totally in love and still denying it xDD
| Catastrophic Monsoon chapter 4 . 9/9/2010
OMG *Q* the lemon was effing hot! LOL i'm pretty sure you're gonna have to change the rating to M hahah :D oh damn this fic was awesome even if it was only 4 chapters but i feel like you shouldn't have ended it like this T-T i want more lol anyways, AWESOME job and good luck on your exams :)
| la fleur d'or chapter 4 . 9/9/2010
YAYYYYY! They finally had sex! A lot! I love you, I truly do! Anyways, the characters were top-notch! And not too much OOC at all! I agree with you, lemons are very hard to write. Thank you for such an amazing read :)
| dragonsfairy chapter 3 . 8/30/2010
I like your story so far. Can't wait for the next chapter and healing bonding.
| Kid chapter 3 . 8/27/2010
Nice battle! Is the Rage spell something you came up with? It's very good! Hahah, I can see Hijikata going all badass on Kamui. :B
Two insignificant points of contention here:
-Hijikata and his hackles rising like a 'dog', it should be 'cat'. I think cat suits Hijikata better anyway.
-Is 'unalloyed' a word?
Burnt balls, damn. That must suck.
Btw, at the rate it's going, unless some gigantic plot-twist occurs and Hijikata gets an OOC kick in the head, this thing's gonna stay bromance. Can't wait for chapter 4!
| StardustDreams chapter 3 . 8/26/2010
Although I pretty much know nothing about Loveless, I was hoping Gintoki would be able to fight. You gotta love someone as powerful as Gintoki ;)
I adore this story! I can't wait for the next chapter~