Reviews for Hot Chocolate
Jennifer Felton chapter 1 . 8/11/2010
I seriously went "Awwwwh ;D" at the end, lmfao. This was brilliant!
coordinationallychallenged chapter 1 . 8/11/2010
I looooved it! It was sweet and funny and i so want one of those! hahaha

Gio :D
parkesy23 chapter 1 . 8/11/2010
Awesome short story

LOVED IT

love the ring Idea - excellent

thanks heaps
Uk Alice chapter 1 . 8/11/2010
awww i loved this one, it was funny and sweet! great chapter!
avidreader69 chapter 1 . 8/11/2010
What a cool proposal!
dark and bittersweet chapter 1 . 8/11/2010
Hilarious! I loved it,can't hold in my sister was staring at me while i was laughing-reading. Lol
DICATAKADD chapter 1 . 8/11/2010
yum!
Kirssy7 chapter 1 . 8/11/2010
Absolutely brilliant!
crackupmonkey chapter 1 . 8/11/2010
:) sweet I need a piece of chocolate
Mrs. Nina Cullen chapter 1 . 8/11/2010
love it. I would so have an edward shaped chocolate peen.

Awsome!
Ilovecherrypie chapter 1 . 8/11/2010
I absolutly loved this one shot, wouldnt mind seeing expanded
susayq chapter 1 . 8/11/2010
Exactly where is their chocolate store? I'm on my way there so I can spend every available dollar I have to buy some of those :)

Susan
dreamsuvedward chapter 1 . 8/11/2010
Yes I have an inexplicable urge for chocolate now, thanks for writing!
marbleFACE chapter 1 . 8/11/2010
This story was the best one I've read! :) Definitely the winner...you are a genius!
luv4jake chapter 1 . 8/11/2010
Omg this was so funny a chocolate dong. I loved the proposal at the end. That chili sound delicious. Good luck in the contest.
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