Reviews for Hayden The Vampire Slayer
the kid chapter 1 . 10/11/2014

Reeeeeeeally now? Please look up "plot structure" and "character" before you write anything else.
Jeremy Shane chapter 2 . 9/27/2010
Good Chapter & More Please
Jeremy Shane chapter 1 . 8/12/2010
Good Chapter & more please
TheRedPoet chapter 1 . 8/12/2010
If you do not know that "I" should always be capitalized, I'm sorry to say that you need to study more before writing stuff of your own.

To me, this story seems like a self-insert (though that's just rude stereotyping on my part.

The storyline's fairly irrelevant seeing as very few people will be able to get through the awful structure of the writing.

Check out a few books or other fics and compare.

Also, it's "Xander".