Reviews for Stop
tiffspiff chapter 1 . 9/2/2010
That was completely amazing. I loved it so much!
wisecurledqueen chapter 1 . 8/29/2010
I really like this. Your writing style is awesome!


Kiddo495 chapter 1 . 8/18/2010
AH-mazing. Good work, chica. I enjoyed reading it. XD!

Keep writin'. (:
Yuuki Sakurai chapter 1 . 8/16/2010
This is SO good! I totally love your Eli! Some of these people are turning him kinda girly...but yours is awesome!
E-Clare all the way chapter 1 . 8/14/2010
I love your one shots that show Eli's dark side. It's a little scary, but good...
Aspiring Oneironaut chapter 1 . 8/12/2010
Was this supposed to be read before the other one? Ooops! But OMG THAT WAS JUST AS INTENSE AND SCARY AND CREEPY. Eli's mind scares me...but I love it anyways! I like the way you write in his POV! D
verbal acuity chapter 1 . 8/11/2010
Eli should never stop because they both clearly want it ;D

I loved this! Positively ADORED it. I really hope to see more from you! :)
Lucy Freebird chapter 1 . 8/11/2010
I love this story because it does show a deeper side of Eli. Great fic
babyspongy chapter 1 . 8/11/2010
This was awesome... maybe you'll reconsider into not making this a one shot? Well, it's worth a shot lol... I liked it!
alexis chapter 1 . 8/11/2010
ohh that was so good! i loved loved loved it..plz keep writing! :):)
Guest chapter 1 . 8/11/2010
I just had a heart attack from the awesomeness of this one shot... More please! ) 3 it soo much! Great format and style, like actual thoughts and pov
Ilooveelijahgoldsworthy chapter 1 . 8/11/2010
This was insane. It literally felt like Eli wrote it, you got his character perfectly! I loved it so much. I think you should write another eclare fanfiction your amazing!
CStardust chapter 1 . 8/11/2010
Oh my GOD, I was WAITING for this.

This is perfect. Eli's not a perfect innocent little kitten. I love that you showcased the more accurate, dark side of him. It's perfect.

katra chapter 1 . 8/11/2010
poetic. your writing leaves a trail of fire in the minds of those who read this piece. edgy and classic! please continue :)