Reviews for After the Break Up
sketched silmaril chapter 1 . 8/24/2010
It was pretty cute story! The only real problem I had with this story was how you made Karin nice after she was acting like a slut. I also felt that this story was a bit rushed. It might have been better if you divided it into two chapters, and develop the character's feelings a bit more.

Other that that, I really liked this story! Nice job!
Mizuki-chan Uchiha chapter 1 . 8/22/2010
i loved it! lol,yhe last sentence was hilarious!
Crazy Cherries chapter 1 . 8/21/2010
Other than the fact that you made karin all nice and forgiving for some reason (dies a little and twitches on the floor) it was a pretty good fic
SakuraUchiha93 chapter 1 . 8/18/2010
good story, loved it :D
shoshoryuu07 chapter 1 . 8/12/2010
\m/ an alternate ending on break-ups. ;;) Nice one. ;;)
Kafeee chapter 1 . 8/12/2010
OMG I CRIED AFTER READING THIS!

You have super powers v.v

You know, this is kinda like my life xD

My best friend had a friend who became my friend and chyeah he's a fast runner and he's an emotionless bastard xD

Anyways I lurrrve your story!
7HeartAndSoul7 chapter 1 . 8/11/2010
Awwwwwww super cute story! XD pretty funny too haha what happened to Karin? O_o lol oh well who cares xP this was really good and a very cute oneshot :3
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