Reviews for The Secret Beneath the Ashes
timothy.nguyen.73 chapter 1 . 10/11/2014
Dam this has potential.
DayStorm chapter 1 . 7/29/2014
Great few paragraphs. I enjoyed it, anyway. Only one thing . . . you have the potential for a full story here! You have GOT to expand on this. I read the summary and immediately clicked on it so that I could read what was here. I really had been just scrolling, looking for something good and I found one! C'mon. You can't leave it like this! haha

Really, though. Good work. Hope you continue with this.
gothgirl97 chapter 1 . 3/22/2013
You need to continue this!
7 Ace chapter 1 . 10/27/2010
Really good start. Do you plan on finishing? I could help with ideas if you would like.
Janay Leonard chapter 1 . 9/23/2010
What an awsesome and devastating story
fun.lover2012 chapter 1 . 8/19/2010
Wow, very nice story! I loved it! Please continue! :)