Reviews for Unplanned Perfection
TennesseeCaliforniaGuy chapter 18 . 8/10/2020
He is or he is not his own person?

So many stories have Alice meddle in Bella and Edward's lives and just go unpunished cause she is a friend that means well.. How about no one is telling what to do with your life, so YOU DON'T get to tell other people what to do with theirs?

Honestly, Bella still gives Edward no credit if she believed any of that shit Riley spewed.
TennesseeCaliforniaGuy chapter 15 . 8/5/2020
This story is so mother fucking one sided it's ridiculous. Bella can make all the threats she wants, Insult Edward all up the yard, and don't FORGET KEEP HIS SON FROM HIM.

But let EDWARD RETURN fire or be angry at her.. BOOM no he's wrong, shut the fuck up, let's bring other characters in, his supposed family to gang up on him..

Like fuck, I get it, you are probably a single mother and consider yourself strong but you are writing a fucking story... At least try to write objectively.
TennesseeCaliforniaGuy chapter 10 . 8/5/2020
The fact you having everyone act rightous in the fact that he had his son kept from him for three years

And the reason being he was too rough during consensual sex? Fucking ludicrous. And reading the early the reviews of the chapter, they all agree with this bull shit?
sam's-lurker-droid chapter 40 . 7/29/2020
What a great story! Thank you for everything you put into this!
LillianBroderick chapter 18 . 7/17/2020
Wonderful chapter
Guest chapter 14 . 6/26/2020
"Her teeth were once again raking over her teeth" Proofreading matters.
kristenblewart chapter 13 . 6/12/2020
What's the significance of Charlie's nightmare and Bella's black eye?
kristenblewart chapter 12 . 6/12/2020
Cammy was the one Edward slept with right
kristenblewart chapter 11 . 6/11/2020
Ok, small progress is still progress
kristenblewart chapter 10 . 6/11/2020
Why Bella whyyyy. Edward was right. He asked if she wants to sleep with her. She said just fucking do it. Bella could have said stop during if he was hurting her, but she didn't. Now she's blaming him that he was rough.
kristenblewart chapter 8 . 5/29/2020
What a mess
kristenblewart chapter 7 . 5/29/2020
kristenblewart chapter 6 . 5/29/2020
I'm skipping so many unnecessary dialogue :(
kristenblewart chapter 5 . 5/29/2020
Wow long chapter
kristenblewart chapter 4 . 5/29/2020
Wow superman returns
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