He is or he is not his own person?

So many stories have Alice meddle in Bella and Edward's lives and just go unpunished cause she is a friend that means well.. How about no one is telling what to do with your life, so YOU DON'T get to tell other people what to do with theirs?

Honestly, Bella still gives Edward no credit if she believed any of that shit Riley spewed.

This story is so mother fucking one sided it's ridiculous. Bella can make all the threats she wants, Insult Edward all up the yard, and don't FORGET KEEP HIS SON FROM HIM.

But let EDWARD RETURN fire or be angry at her.. BOOM no he's wrong, shut the fuck up, let's bring other characters in, his supposed family to gang up on him..

Like fuck, I get it, you are probably a single mother and consider yourself strong but you are writing a fucking story... At least try to write objectively.

The fact you having everyone act rightous in the fact that he had his son kept from him for three years

And the reason being he was too rough during consensual sex? Fucking ludicrous. And reading the early the reviews of the chapter, they all agree with this bull shit?

What a great story! Thank you for everything you put into this!

Wonderful chapter

"Her teeth were once again raking over her teeth" Proofreading matters.

What's the significance of Charlie's nightmare and Bella's black eye?

Cammy was the one Edward slept with right

Ok, small progress is still progress

Why Bella whyyyy. Edward was right. He asked if she wants to sleep with her. She said just fucking do it. Bella could have said stop during if he was hurting her, but she didn't. Now she's blaming him that he was rough.

What a mess

Reviewww

I'm skipping so many unnecessary dialogue :(

Wow long chapter

Wow superman returns