Reviews for She wants to be Famous!
Shelby D chapter 16 . 7/11/2011
Crap." She fell in. Carlos jumped in right after her, picking her body up from underwater."

Doubt It nig, you would not win. But You WOULD fall in. Spaz.

"He made a heroic pose."


"(he already took his off)"

Convienent. Whore.

"That, my adorable little friend,"


"She shushed him"


"Is out of the question."

Talk about A run-on sentence.

"You know what they simbolize?"

Um. *Raises Hand* Rollerscates.

"It made my butt sore."

I can think of a few things that can also make his butt sore.

"Sore butt my ass!"

Ha. Haha.

"black vest"

Whatever, Those rules aren't real.' 'They were real that time I wore a Vest!' 'That vest was disgusting.' 'YOU CAN'T SIT WITH US'

"That roof is dangerous."

No shit.

"Calm down Carlos! It only takes 10 minutes to get to the school. And we have a good 20 till it starts which gives us just enough to hang out with the guys and get to class."

*Claps Sarcastically* Bravo. You can use basic math.

"It's Tuesday."

Yesterday was Monday and Wednesday Comes afterward.

"And I have really cute outfit on."


"Guess who also lives on the same street as Charloette and Carlos?"

OOh! Ooh! Is it the totally sexy thang? Um, what;s her name? Um. Shelby! That's it! Is it Shelby?

" Jimmy Wilkins."

Aw, boner kill

"Well, if it isn't my two favorite Dorks!"

I thought it said Dicks and I giggled but I reread it and was all :(

"He looked alot older than he did 6 years ago. "


"He lost all his baby fat"

But-BUt, how will he stay warm in the winter.

"torturing Carlos who was trying to squirm away, eyes shut tight."

This sounds like something out of my fanfics. Kinky.

"never came"

Story of my life.

" I was just gonna birth some cows"

That's Wisconsin you ruh-tard.

"awkward stage"

Story of Your life.

"Together we'll be the Hollywood party kings of Hollywood."

I see what you fucking did there.

"Hey Papi!" Carlos exclaimed."

All I can think of is that one gif.

"That's the same one as Brad Pitt uses! Dude you have Brad Pitt's bike!"

IIIII Doubt it

"Does that mean we can't walk to school anymore? Lame~"

You asshole.

"You got an owie?"

Yea. And it fucking HURTs.

"She started to slow down"

Oh yeah. That's smart. That's never backfired on someone.

"see Jimmy not that far behind her."

Well. There's a first time for everything.

"Jimmy, Jimbo, Jim Jim Cheree"

I wish to rape you.

"Logan on a scooter(nerd)."


"Marco!" James called"

Holds breath*



"I am going to kill him." Kendall growled.

*Fans self* That boy. Mah Goodness.

"I blame my height."

I always do.

"There a couple of sizes too big cause that's all the guy could offer but all you have to do is tighten the laces extra hard."


"Also a skateboard"

Cuz skateboards are manly

"She gave him a peck on the cheek causing him to blush"


"And then they both made it to school on time and were tortured to death by the evil Science Sub. The End."


"Aw Carlos you were so sweet~" Stephanie coo'd pinching his cheek"


"She jumps on Carlos' back, glomping him."


"Never! High Hoe Silver!"


"She said slapping butt making him move."

This Reminds me of my fanfics.

"No Horseplay!"


"I'm lonely without your reviews keeping me company."

Herp Derp Biatriz is ALWAYS lonely. HErp Derp No boyfirend. Herp Derp Orlando trip. Herp Derp only 19 reviews.

"You'll also catch her OC and my OC Lily in her Story: Lost Love and Diet Coke. You should read it cuz it's really good~"

This is my favorite part.

This was not as amusing as the last chapter. Fix that with the next chapter..
XxMiddle-School-WriterxX2018 chapter 16 . 7/8/2011
great job cant wait for the next one
Black Raven 13 chapter 15 . 6/21/2011
Oh Shelby, what would we do without her? :)
Shelby D chapter 15 . 6/18/2011
Long Review is long

That was long and so enjoyable and so freaking romantic and GAH! I love you and I want you to read this before I get all amusing. When you told me you were gonna end it, it was like if BTR went off the air. I died a little inside

Okay, inner comentary!

[ "You should really lock your door." They shrugged. "Probably."]

I love you, because this happened IRL and they really should because I heard that there was a rapis in the palmwoods, he's climbing in your windows snatching your Carlitos up. Hide yo James, Hide yo Kendall, they snatching BTR up in herr.

[ "Thinks she's pretty, hot, nice ass? Is that how you talk to women? As if they're objects? Do you not respect Women? Do you not respect our Charloette?" He slaps him. "How dare you!"]

*Raises hand* Uhm, yeah. That bitch is fine, slap me if you must.

["Hey don't mess with Texas!"

"Why do you care?"

"I...don't know."]

*Raises hand again* I said that! Buahaha. I'm so funny.

[Logan and Carlos were in the Lobby of the Palmwoods hiding behind newspapers as Charloette walked to the elevator.]

With Fake mooostaches?

[ "Okay, I guess we're playing the 'Let's Ignore Charlie' Game...Love this game."]

*Raises hand...AGAIN* Fuck my arm is tired...whoo. I love that game too!

[They knocked and Jo...]

Ugh. Hate that bitch.

["Are you aware that you have a date? No offence Charloette but your not exactly looking all drop dead gorgeous right now, which is a shame cuz you usually do. So we need to get you ready."]

Legit, my favorite far.

["More like you didn't wear make-up."]

I stand corrected.

[ Mascara, blue eye shadow, pink lip gloss, and a little blush on her cheeks.]

Blue eye shadow is for Hookers...just sayin.

[Friday March 17th, 2010; 6:15 P.M. Aprox. 45 min till Operation Hoedown Throwdown]

Whenever I read these, I have the little clock ticking from 24 in my head. JTILYK.

[stereotypical movie of a young southern girl in Texas wanting to fulfill her dream of becoming the first female bull rider in the country.]

I might rape you tonight, that's how much I love you for this line.

["I disagree. You look adorable in this." James said standing up.]

I agree with James...

[unattractive long Plaid Dress.]

*troll face* Unnatractive Long plaid dress is Unnatractive...and long

[ They saw medium height girl with black wavy hair step in. Upon closer inspection, she had a heart shaped face, big green eyes with dark eyelashes, light freckles spread across her nose, also looked like she had been out in the sun a lot with her sun-kissed skin, and full lips.]

Oh damn. Who is that hot peice a'ass?

["This is Shelby Day." Kendall introduced.]

Oh shit. *Amanda Bynes voice* Thaaaat's me!

["P.I.T." Shelby commented.]

Bitch better recognize!

[ I got caught behind the Jennifers.]

*Janice from mean girls* Those bitches.

["These shouldn't even be considered shorts!"]

God, I fucking love me.

["Into one Sexy Bitch!"]

Do you love me? I love me.

[. Although when your date see's you, you'll see it in his pants."]

Sir! Yes you there! Do you love me?..Mmhm...Yes...Thought so.

["I heard from a certain boy band that you happen to love daises and that the pink ones look beautiful tucked behind you ear." He put the flower in her hair.]


["Lucky indeed." He smirked.]


["Sorry, Stupid joke."]

I wish to kill you tonight.

["My dad was in the Army]


[My mom's your average housewife.]

MY ASS! She doesn't even mug you!

["Boom Baby! I'm back!" She said whipping her head.]

*Shine-ing a mirror* God. Me, will you marry me? Oh Me! I accept! I love me. I love me too.

["Just call me the Fanz."]

Nigga, have you SEEN Happy Days? The Fanz make Jukeboxes work.

[Now I'm gonna go chow down on some meat!"]

Pfft. Immaturity for the win.



Shit just got real.

["Char, can we plea-"]

Char-lo-ette! Give him a CHAY-ANCE!

["Oh Waney!" A voice called out, interrupting him. A girl with long blonde hair, shorter shorts than Charloette, and pretty much a bikini on top appeared on Wayne-Wayne's arm. "Where'd you go? I thought you were gonna meet me on the dance floor?" She whined Wayne closed his eyes, already knowing what was gonna happen next.]

Lol, nope! Nevermind.

[. "Nice flower bud. I got her a bouquet." ]

Cuz Wally Dooley does it classy muthafucka.

[We're Big Time Rush, we're a fun mix of Rock, Pop, with a dash of R&B.]

I think I wanna cheat on Me with You for this.

[In a instant Colby had her in his arms.]

*Gets Binocculars for closer inspection* Is this nigga...oh yeah. That's a Dapper Bitch right therr.

["You better watch yourself." She warned.]

Nigguh better check yo'self fo' you wreck yo' self.

["Anyone wanna play 52 pick-up?"]

Fuck your couch.

Shelby D chapter 13 . 3/16/2011
D'AWWWWW. Oh my lanta, so sweet. Except the part where her glasses sound suspiciously like mine.

But it was cute and btdubbs, where did you get glasses info. It's all wrong. But still. It was so cute I derped
Black Raven 13 chapter 12 . 1/13/2011
Aw! Cute!

'We threw eggs at his house'

'We could have thrown bricks'

HAHA! XD Good job!
Black Raven 13 chapter 12 . 12/21/2010
Kissing? What's Kissing? Kissing isn't even a word!

HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! I loved this chapter! BTW, I think Bitters should be Scrooge, also, I'm glad we got you out of your writers block! Merry Christmas B! Maybe we can hang out sometime in the next 2 weeks?
JuicyJams chapter 12 . 11/28/2010
Woo-Who happy year-avesary Big Time Rush
Black Raven 13 chapter 11 . 11/26/2010
Haha! Wayne Wayne! I wonder how the guys will deal with this?
Shelby D chapter 1 . 11/22/2010
Dude. I laughed so hard, I farted. Hilarious stuff. Your style got better and btdubbs, Gustaco isn't a word. Oh and Rick davis, Nick Davis, connection?

pS I hate you!
thatgingerprincess143 chapter 10 . 11/5/2010
luv luv luv this fic it was just what i needed after i found out my vision isnt perfect mom thinks its becuz of fanfic so im reading ALOT while i am still able wish me luck and hope i can stay on this amazing site to read your (and others) amazing stroys
thatgingerprincess143 chapter 8 . 10/10/2010
thatgingerprincess143 chapter 5 . 9/2/2010
eww i h8 jimmy
thatgingerprincess143 chapter 4 . 8/21/2010
scene at the end of this was awww

JAMEZ is a jerk

i hit my head wuth a pillow when the people were auditioning exept for the last guy...until he started contacting her overlord

and i squeled when james came back during the turd song

i realized Logan looks HOT in a lab coat

and dont even get me started on the self party i had when they did the concert in time square special ( i say self party becasue i was gonna have my friend over but she went away and so i had a self party i was sad but then BTR came over at 8 and i felt all better...technically 8:13 becasue i missed the first few minuites reading BTR fanfics so THANK GAWD for DVR)

i went to bed laughing and quoting BTR i didnt fall asleep till like LATE

who else was mad when they concert from time square stopped early (it was supposed to go till 9:30 and spongebob came on i stopped DVRing but did it come back on at all?
thatgingerprincess143 chapter 3 . 8/18/2010
i know my brother is like STOP writing go outside its depressing becasue i write in my finished basement blasting BTR (and watching it)
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