|Reviews for A Little Breathing Room|
| Guest chapter 1 . 11/21/2012
continue this story because its awesome! [if you can and will]. THERES MY COMMENT NOW DONT KILL MEEE! :D
| Jayadragon chapter 1 . 8/14/2010
That was pretty good. I quite enjoyed the read.
| DawnDusk1 chapter 1 . 8/11/2010
Hey i thought it was great with all the details and such
here is my like... i guess a report card of some sort.
realism-It was pretty much realistic through the whole story I thought it was really cool A
Planning-I seems very planned and it is cool but I cant help but think you just went along writing as you go. A-
Plot & storyline-I did not see a big plot line. It is just an assassin guy trying to kill someone. Please explain where you were going with Plot and maybe I will understand. B
Overall rating- I would say a solid A rating is good for this.