Reviews for In the Sun
MPP1992 chapter 28 . 4/4/2019
Lovely story. Please don't stop writing because some idiots can't read authors notes which clearly state that stories are set in the modern era *rolls eyes*
jamestrash chapter 21 . 12/5/2017
27?! 27?! James is a slag.
Mimihagi-sama chapter 1 . 5/17/2017
Beckham, Robben? In the 70s? Seriously? Do your research, at least.
harrypotterforeverx chapter 28 . 9/12/2014
I just cried I'm so emotional
Thesa chapter 28 . 5/29/2014
loved your fanfic :-)
Mia and the moon chapter 12 . 11/6/2013
too much detail.I love your writing style but wish this chapter was slightly less explicit.
ellioe chapter 1 . 5/31/2013
I would have read on from this chapter had I not seen references to things belonging in the 90s/2000s when the story is set in the 70s. It seemed like a fine story up until then, but if the established theme of differences between muggle borns and purebloods is based on things from the 90s/2000s when it's clearly set in the 70s, I simply cannot get my head around the strange choices you've made to have included music from this time instead of The Beatles and John Lennon which would clearly be the obvious choice. Try looking at 'The White Album' fanfiction on here for some pointers in making your stories more in tune with their relevant time periods. Also, watch your grammar! Otherwise, a nice idea.

Ellie
LadyElejahDarcy chapter 22 . 4/20/2012
very OOC but i love every bit of it, very refreashing to see a totally diffrent Lilly-ish character!
sam chapter 28 . 3/26/2012
incredibly sweet story and i like your taste in music
Little Wise Owl chapter 1 . 2/3/2012
Shhh I haven't finished reading the chap yet I just HAD to review when I saw A Fine Frenzy

OMFG I LOVE HER MUSIC LIKE AMAZING !

If you like that kind try Agnes Obel / Daughter they're both AMAZING !

I shall finish the rest now ] we obvs both have amazing taste in music xxxx
Finally Settled For an Indian chapter 12 . 12/23/2011
I actually thought that it was pretty decent for M. And you did give the warning. But I think I wouldn't like to see more of it. I would prefer the fade-outs from now on, because that's just more imaginative. Also, Lily's kind of not my favourite right now...you know, drinking and acting on her wishes. Not cool, dude. Lily's awesome enough to acknowledge her desires when she's sober. But it was a nice chapter otherwise.
American Honestly chapter 9 . 12/23/2011
the end was hilarious! I loved that you left it hanging in there. I had a lot of fun imagining their expressions.
British chapter 5 . 12/23/2011
The dialogues at the beginning made absolutely no sense. Only when Wicked was mentioned did I sort of caught on. I had to read it thrice to get it right.

But it's getting suspenseful in this chapter. Can't wait to read the next. And, another typo: it's heel, not heal.
French Much chapter 4 . 12/23/2011
I LOVE Benjy Fenwick! Like seriously. :D BTW, there was a spelling error: incite, instead of insight. I also liked the fact that Benjy asked her to consider a date with Potter and not force it on her. Awesome! Thanks for sharing!
german chapter 3 . 12/23/2011
very interesting! The characters seem to have depth. Liking it so far. Merci beaucoup.
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