|Reviews for Perfection|
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/1
That was INTENCE
| Guest chapter 1 . 9/18/2013
Read this story years ago and just now remembered it. Just as incredibly chilling as I remember. I don't think it needs any continuation. I like the open-endedness of the ending, and the repetition of the motif as the final line. Adding more would ruin the mystery which makes this story work so well. The only thing that is a bit fuzzy is how Legolas got captured in the first place, and why his friendship with the Fellowship, especially Gimli, is implied to be so strong if he was taken as far back as Amon Hen.
| Nearing Midnight chapter 1 . 7/7/2013
I know that 'perfection' is practically the antagonist (for this story at least), but this story is honestly a work of perfection. It is eerily beautiful and so beautifully dark.
This is an awesome story.
| Guest chapter 1 . 5/13/2013
and then ...?!
Oh come on, most of the stories that are worth reading are dropped! What is happening in this site!?
| ForeverRainingFire chapter 1 . 5/6/2013
Great story! Really creepy, but great!
| C.L. Forest chapter 1 . 2/5/2013
Chilling yet eerily beautiful.
| Bushwah chapter 1 . 7/15/2012
I am perfection. I do not falter. I do not fail.
| Pesti chapter 1 . 6/24/2012
Chilling, but beautifully done.
| Les concombres masques chapter 1 . 1/21/2012
I thought it was great. Yes, it was twisted. Yes, it was dark. And yes, it was creepy. That just makes it a perfect story in my mind.
Joking aside, it was really well written. The time skips were masterfully handled, and that "perfection" leit-motiv really tied it together.
The decent of Legolas was also well done. Most story's of this type show that the author was in too much of a hurry to get to the character's breaking point, and that makes them too weak compared to canon.(Not that I am a canon Nazi, but in this case, it's good to stick to canon, IMO).
So anyway, great one shot. I don't think it should have a sequel, because then it would ruin the chilling last words, and there would be nothing left to say about Legolas or Sauron. As much as I liked it, it would be a shame to continue it.
So that being said, congratulations!
| gginsc chapter 1 . 6/18/2011
Please update! This is a lovely story but it just begs for an update!
| WonderingGirl chapter 1 . 3/7/2011
What an amazing one shot!
Wow! I would love to give you a better review, but I am simply in awe!
Thank you for sharing that wonderfully written story.
| Caelhir chapter 1 . 12/20/2010
Wow. Absolutely stunning every time that I read it. Stunning. Incredible. Well done.
| Iavalir chapter 1 . 7/29/2010
Very chilling. I enjoyed it highly. :)
| The Lauderdale chapter 1 . 4/17/2010
My goodness, what an insane number of reviews. All deserved though. I realized as I was reading that I must have read this once before. Did not at all mind reading it again.
| santeria chapter 1 . 3/24/2010
This is amazing. I can't even think of an adequate word to describe this. It's just...wow.