Reviews for Vacation Over
Betherzz chapter 9 . 8/25/2010
cute chapter ;) cant wait to see what comes next
IMSLES chapter 8 . 8/24/2010
Those Abby lines were good. lol.

Sue
IMSLES chapter 9 . 8/24/2010
Cute little bit of Tiva there.

Sue
Betherzz chapter 7 . 8/19/2010
good chapter... cant wait to see what comes next
Betherzz chapter 6 . 8/16/2010
its a good chapter... cant wait to see what comes next
Meilea2010 chapter 6 . 8/16/2010
Great story and chapter. hate to see Gibbs leave. When do we get the next update?
IMSLES chapter 6 . 8/16/2010
I like the introspection on Tony's part and of course Gibbs ability to read minds :-) The true anticipator- that's Gibbs.

Sue
Nicoya456 chapter 5 . 8/15/2010
nice story
Betherzz chapter 5 . 8/14/2010
cute chapter ;) cant wait to see what comes next
IMSLES chapter 3 . 8/13/2010
I love how the team is all there for him. Even better how Tonyish to ask about Franks and Gibbs.

'short chapter master'! I think it fits you nicely.

Sue
Betherzz chapter 2 . 8/13/2010
good first 2 chapters of the story... wish they were a bit longer though... cant wait to see what comes next
IMSLES chapter 2 . 8/13/2010
Not sure about the shoulder, but I find it a minor detail (though I suppose Tony wouldn't lol).

Short chapter, but lots revealed.

Sue
IMSLES chapter 1 . 8/12/2010
I've never encountered a story with your writing technique. It's easy enough to follow and simply gets the story and emotions through.

Look forward to reading more.

Sue