|Reviews for A getaway|
| Nikkitty Slytherin chapter 3 . 9/6/2012
MORE! Whats the sequels name?
| Melmel Phase chapter 3 . 3/26/2012
HOW COULD YOU END IT LIKE THAT? TTATT that pure torture! It was getting SO good! I loved it by the way! 3 :D But seriously please tell me your making a sequel
| South Park's Only PKMN Master chapter 3 . 12/18/2011
I liked this story, it's very nice. Keep up the good work! :D
| Guest chapter 3 . 11/25/2011
Paul want be in black and white, and you should a sequel it real good!
| Justice237 chapter 3 . 1/22/2011
What'll happen next? This is exciting!
| Peanut Butter Pichu chapter 3 . 1/15/2011
that was pretty good, it just depends on who reads it.
| Sasu-Sama' Sarukiji-Sempai chapter 3 . 11/28/2010
Now I got it...
| Sasu-Sama' Sarukiji-Sempai chapter 1 . 11/28/2010
| cristalcat101 chapter 3 . 10/22/2010
Please continue this story and the sequel soon! CX
| nana chapter 3 . 9/16/2010
yes This was pretty good
| Mantinas chapter 3 . 9/15/2010
This was pretty good.
| kiba-dark chapter 3 . 9/14/2010
continues with the story if you can preonto
This entertaining and interesting
| mexmixer chapter 2 . 8/16/2010
Personally, I would recommend that you continue as a series. I do not think that you would be able to wrap up all loose endings and give adequate explanations in simply one more chapter. Also, I wanted to point out to you your change in point of view at the beginning of this chapter. The first few paragraphs are told in the third person, while you start presenting in the first person starting in the sixth paragraph. Not trying to be rude, just trying to help you be a better writer.
| Clarrolx chapter 2 . 8/16/2010
That was a cute chapter. _
I don't have any suggestions, sorry. ; I'm kind of new to this fandom so... ou could always have a argument and/or conversation and what Ash and Paul had been up to before the fight and why Paul joined it. (If you weren't already doing that.)
XD Great story so far though.
Plz update soon!
| Mantinas chapter 2 . 8/16/2010