AliceKat chapter 1 . 7/1/2013
... I've seen or well, read stories like that .-. and I liked them :P
Guest chapter 1 . 4/14/2013
Your right an all them. I can actually recall nearly all if these happening in 1 story like the most popular one about shugo chara with like 190,000 word XD but funny and true
Guest chapter 1 . 8/18/2012
Bitch pleas what gives u the right to say to say u don't like him being a playboy and amu new girl or her with big boobs wtf? Thats u let them be some people like can hurt there Feeling like then they fricken discontinue their story and amu with big boob so u want her to be flat?and we all know y ikuto like her not for her body but for her not being like regular girls she's different also we call tadase gay either cause we don't like we don't like him with amu cause there horrible together they don't match also yeah I know this is long stfu I harpy see people right there names they probably don't know English at leather they try now I'm done bitch
claraowl chapter 1 . 6/10/2012
Noted. -
chickennugetmasterplan104 chapter 1 . 9/1/2011
gayward cullen thats a good one
Shimo19 chapter 1 . 6/16/2011
Is going to far. Also you breached the rules by putting material that is not a fanfiction on the site. On a happier note, this made me laugh so hard that I had to stop reading, because I couldn't see with the tears in my eyes. Good job, but abide by the rules or you may find yourself without an account.
Shimo19 chapter 1 . 6/16/2011
As much as I agree with you on some points, I don't think you should criticize the authors here. Most of your "tips" are oddly specific, and apply to only one fanfiction, making it clear that you just decided to put all your complaints into a fanfiction, so that you could save time and make sure people read them. Also, the authors put storys here, using their precious time, and it's only so that we can read them. You can criticize them on the reviews, but telling everybody by turning it into a fanfic
Charlie She of the Moon Dragon chapter 1 . 3/20/2011
"Is taadase gay, no but if you make him that way pair him up with Gayward Cullen."

YOU ARE MY IDOL! :D *BOWS DOWN* I WILL FOLLOW YOU (figuratively i'm not a stalker) FOREVER 3

xXCool Blue SkyXx chapter 1 . 3/4/2011
o.o u really did point out the problems :3 and i luv it its funny! :D
XD chapter 1 . 11/16/2010
Nice! This made me laugh an gave me good tips! :D
Devoid Of Color chapter 1 . 10/14/2010
lol I like the last thing you said good fur uz.
hironohime chapter 1 . 8/23/2010
Don't crave for reviews, that's sad. Search for Amuto fanfics that have with more than one review and learn the plot. After that try to improve the plot in your way ;).
hiddenstaer chapter 1 . 8/13/2010
"2. Peach-Pit is so confused about who Amu should end up with.

3. It was really...REALLY...wrong for Nagihiko to invite Amu to a sleepover while he was dressed as Nadeshiko."

YES! haha that was very wrong...but so cute...

And number one.. If they don't put her with Iktou people will cry.. if they put her with Tadase, people will kill them (:

Haha I loved that..That was funny, and veryy! true!. So many things are over used, and it bugs me.
PeRs0n-MEH chapter 1 . 8/12/2010
lolz funneh stuff there jina! also funneh how ppl rake this so seriously! haha! i like the very last one!

3. It was really...REALLY...wrong for Nagihiko to invite Amu to a sleepover while he was dressed as Nadeshiko.

lolz! totally wrong! lolz
blueberrymuffinsandtea chapter 1 . 8/12/2010

Loved it. Some of your best work yet, muh deyur.

And with some of those things I agree... Like the weird facts, at the end, number 3... NAGI SHOULD'VE HAD RIMA OVER! Or better yet, moi~ :3

And lawls. Boobs! Ituko only likes mAu because of her boobs :DD

And Utau the lez only likes Itkuo because of his boobs! :DD

Wow, the world is vereh weird.

Write more of this! And I suggest Rimahiko... Or Ikuma ;3

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