Reviews for What Came Out From the Freezer
HawthornSword chapter 1 . 3/12/2014
This is fantastic! :)
Martienne chapter 1 . 8/12/2010
I see what you mean about it not being your best. But it was still pretty good. The imagery with the freezer, her feeling trapped, and the comparison to a wildcat all rung true. It's just missing a little oomph somewhere.

But I like reading your poems. :)
iwantyourovaries chapter 1 . 8/12/2010
This was really good- the comparison of Tex to a cat isinteresting- they both need incentive, and both are a bit aloof.

"For the last time she was in this place,

This was her Hell,"

for some reason, I really like that line...great job ]