|Reviews for Kiss You All Over|
| Oscar yu chapter 1 . 1/10
This was pretty well written besides some of the confusing sentences such as the one where it said "she took her arm as her pillow" didn't make sense but I liked everything else.
| Al.kh chapter 1 . 1/7
One of the best i have read!
| PrettyWithAPistol chapter 1 . 12/24/2016
I wish I knew where to start, but - Wow. Holy hell that was hot. Those two have always had chemistry, but that kind of passion was just...
I think I died a little. Who knew it could be so sweet.
For this being out-of-character behavior (at least this early on in their timeline, we hope haha), it was surprisingly in-character. It didn't seem awkward or forced. In terms of your writing, I mean.
The writing alone was marvelous, even without the juicy details. The pacing, the believable characterisations, the spot-on adjectives, etc - the whole thing was mind-blowing.
I can't wait to see what else you've shared. Brava ~
| Guest chapter 1 . 12/20/2016
| mayametz13 chapter 1 . 10/18/2016
It was so good i loved how Lucy mentioned Virgo
| Hazel121617 chapter 1 . 8/14/2016
That was so fucking hot! And it was really good!
| Renee chapter 1 . 5/23/2016
I think that was just amazing it suits them very well I'm my opinion
| Featherwhiskers chapter 1 . 5/15/2016
Really enjoyed this fanfic. May be the best one I've ever read
| Guest chapter 1 . 4/27/2016
Holy fuck this was the best thing I've ever read...
| Guest chapter 1 . 4/8/2016
| wow chapter 1 . 3/30/2016
that was HOT
| sina chapter 1 . 1/1/2016
it was great and sexy as hell but in all that goodness and awesome sentences i found that natsu is like a sex god and lucy is a victem and its not really a bad thing but keeping the balance is sure make things more exciting.
thanks again for your hot and enjoyable nalu story.
| Guest chapter 1 . 11/30/2015
I love the story
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/30/2015
Soooooo haaawt lke ohmygawd
| Plains-Of-White chapter 1 . 8/3/2015
BRILLIANT! One of the best I've read!