Reviews for Kiss You All Over
MegatronDBZ chapter 1 . 10/6/2017
not bad... the pairing is shit tho
nonstopfandoms chapter 1 . 7/5/2017
Wow. Like wow. *blushes*
Like to be honest this is one of da best lemons in hereee (thank u smol cute bean for writing this).
It wasn't just like plain u-know-what, it was also kinda beautiful i think? Cause they were so comfortable with each other and so trusting and in love and that's what that all is about. Haven't been a passionate nalu fan before but hell if i ain't one now.

lots of love and appreciation 3
Shaye chapter 1 . 3/5/2017
Wow. I love it. Not the nasty parts but the cuteness between them.
Oscar yu chapter 1 . 1/10/2017
This was pretty well written besides some of the confusing sentences such as the one where it said "she took her arm as her pillow" didn't make sense but I liked everything else. chapter 1 . 1/7/2017
One of the best i have read!
PrettyWithAPistol chapter 1 . 12/24/2016
Good God...
I wish I knew where to start, but - Wow. Holy hell that was hot. Those two have always had chemistry, but that kind of passion was just...
I think I died a little. Who knew it could be so sweet.

For this being out-of-character behavior (at least this early on in their timeline, we hope haha), it was surprisingly in-character. It didn't seem awkward or forced. In terms of your writing, I mean.

The writing alone was marvelous, even without the juicy details. The pacing, the believable characterisations, the spot-on adjectives, etc - the whole thing was mind-blowing.

I can't wait to see what else you've shared. Brava ~
Guest chapter 1 . 12/20/2016
mayametz13 chapter 1 . 10/18/2016
It was so good i loved how Lucy mentioned Virgo
Hazel121617 chapter 1 . 8/14/2016
That was so fucking hot! And it was really good!
Renee chapter 1 . 5/23/2016
I think that was just amazing it suits them very well I'm my opinion
Featherwhiskers chapter 1 . 5/15/2016
Really enjoyed this fanfic. May be the best one I've ever read
Guest chapter 1 . 4/27/2016
Holy fuck this was the best thing I've ever read...
Guest chapter 1 . 4/8/2016
Too sensual
wow chapter 1 . 3/30/2016
that was HOT
sina chapter 1 . 1/1/2016
it was great and sexy as hell but in all that goodness and awesome sentences i found that natsu is like a sex god and lucy is a victem and its not really a bad thing but keeping the balance is sure make things more exciting.
thanks again for your hot and enjoyable nalu story.
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