|Reviews for The Final Game: continued|
| Revella chapter 3 . 2/12
That was really good.
| slystir chapter 3 . 7/24/2013
Bwahaha. "And the violin is going to get it as well". Very nice. Good dialogue. Your prose could use a little buff up. Watch your tenses. Even when discussing inanimate objects a writer must refer to multiple items as "they" rater than "it". All the best. Thank you for posting. A lovely little piece.
| slystir chapter 1 . 7/24/2013
Gosh that was good. Glad you got enough "yes" reviews to continue.
| OnlyIntuition chapter 3 . 6/16/2013
Sorry too lazy to log in. Will favorite this later. In a mild rush but couldn't not read this! Brilliant! Loved it! :) Sequel please!
| jbug chapter 3 . 5/14/2013
I enjoyed it immensely! Good job!
| stargazerdown chapter 2 . 5/12/2013
Oh, yay. This is so cute/sweet/fun/adorable. I don't even know, Hurrying to next chapter!
| Addict to Fanfics chapter 3 . 1/29/2013
I'm ordering you to do another one... if you want to? Please? I really did like it and now I'm curious about the full truth instead of the half that was given. Something along the lines your 'rubbing off on you' idea maybe? Or maybe something completely different... John's a high-functioning sociopath too but hides his differences by mimicking others through his life? The comment on the 'recently divorced' bit threw me off because it's not medical knowledge so... I haven't a clue really but if you'll consider a sequel can you PM me and say so.
| DammitJim chapter 3 . 5/17/2012
Fantastic! Not sure what I love more, the first chapter or the last. Would love to read more :)
| gginsc chapter 3 . 12/24/2010
Consider this a bribe. Please, please, please write more!
| 98Shaddowolff98 chapter 1 . 12/15/2010
There are other chapters so i am not sure whether you meant an actual 2nd story, or more chapters, but anyway i vote YES!
This chapter is wonderful! :)
| Black-Dranzer-1119 chapter 3 . 10/29/2010
This is really interesting. I like the fact that you showed off John's medical knowledge as it is rather understated in the show. As he was in the army he was probably used to people hiding minor injuries and stuff.
| Hyper Kid007 chapter 3 . 10/25/2010
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE! COUNTINE YOUR STORY!
_ XOXO Hyper Kid007
| drawingfish chapter 3 . 9/22/2010
I like this sentence '...Sherlock looked at the face of his friend, his colleague, his flatmate, *his-something else*...' How Touching!
| Cartoonheart chapter 2 . 9/7/2010
I loved it :} You have very nice way with words! Thank you!
| Cartoonheart chapter 3 . 9/7/2010
OK, you win the internet for using a Coldplay lyric. OK, I'm just gonna go read the story too! :P