|Reviews for But I Thought You Were Straight|
| superFREAKINwholock chapter 7 . 11/1/2013
This is well written and well thought out. This must be one of the best fanfic I have read, easily. :):):):)
| Mari Wollsch chapter 7 . 6/19/2013
great story xxxxxxxx
| frustrated chapter 1 . 5/14/2013
You write interesting stories. That being said, I never make it more than a chapter or two in before I quit reading. I have this pet peeve about tense. You inevitably switch between past and present. Now, while I really do not care for stories written in present tense in general it is still better than inconsistentcy. Please don't think I am writing this to ne mean. I have seen a lot of awsome writers who don't get the appreciation they deserve because their stories are hard to read. I can understand how hard it can be to work around learning disabilities, because I suffer them as well, but we do have options. Betas can be hard to keep up with, but there are those who will clean up your work even after it has been posted. Something that helps me is to listen to what I have written. I use a program called Free Natural Reader, cause you just copy the text and hit play. This works for me because I have a lot easier time hearing the errors than reading them. Your stories deserve every effort you can give them. I wish you luck. I will keep coming back and trying because what you write is interesting. Oh, and sorry this review is anonymous, but FF won't let me sign in from my phone for some reason.
| LadyTeldra chapter 7 . 3/2/2013
You want to know what's sad? My biological mom would get me those sorts of presents... As would the mother I adopted... And my little sister... Hell, my two best friends might actually think it was a good idea too. Though the worse is when my great grandmother sent me handcuffs and condoms for my birthday when I got my first boyfriend... I thought I'd die. It was absolute proof that the French are at least a little more open about that... 86 and still knew where to look... .
One would think in a family like that the men would be unbearable, but no. They're the ones apologizing for the crazies. And it is more 6 am on my one day off this week... Definitely bedtime. Before I share anymore embarrassing tidbits.
| LadyTeldra chapter 3 . 2/28/2013
-.- You'd barely believe the memory a keg and a car can bring up... It may have something to do with two idiot teenagers, an old boat, several things of alchohol (one actually being a keg our father bought on Savannah), a match (it wasn't 'purposely' lit...), and jumping into alligator infested waters to avoid a fiery doom.
| Ishtar205 chapter 7 . 1/19/2013
Thanks a lot for that ! It was a beautiful story, and you made a great plot from a 51
I especially love your persona of Jane Que Public ;b
| readinggirl1989 chapter 7 . 11/2/2012
| AngelQueen chapter 7 . 9/15/2012
OMG THIS STORY IS SO AMAZING! I am completely in love with it and how you portrayed Jim's life from the perspective of so many people! I think Jane was actually my favorite, even though every single chapter was outstanding!
Heh, love that supreme moment of AWKWARD at Spock and Jim's wedding when they realized that Pike's lover was Jim's ex. Teehee! :D
Also, I admit I am so very very curious as to the details of the confrontation between Jane and Winona! :D
Again, excellent story! It's definitely going on my favorites list! :)
| Guest chapter 7 . 8/31/2012
This was wonderful to read. i clicked on it expecting an amusing fluff. instead I have been glued to my computer for several hours, tuning out everything in order to read every single word before falling asleep. Thank you for writing this.
| Chibi Tenshi Sama chapter 2 . 6/21/2012
... And when I say series, I mean the whole collection, including the other stories (Press Release, Wedding Video)
| Chibi Tenshi Sama chapter 1 . 6/21/2012
Discovered this on ksarchive, but since I don't have an account there, couldn't review or favourite etc.
I've been really enjoying this series. Funny, creative and just what I was looking for.
Keep up the good work!
| AnExpressionOfWisdom chapter 7 . 4/17/2012
Aww I love it especially how you tie all the stories together and add details as you go!
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| Kalidris chapter 7 . 3/6/2012
I spent a good part of yesterdays evening and also this morning reading this fic, I actually only put it down to at least get 3 hours of sleep. I love this story, its just awesome. Did you ever write the sequel you mentioned? I couldn't find anything ...?
| Kira Marauder Girl chapter 7 . 11/1/2011
i love it!
i really like the way Jim proposed, Jane, how it ended, i loved everything :)
| zeynel chapter 7 . 8/21/2011
I love your 'short story'! *grins*