|Reviews for Blue Skies, Fresh Air, Freedom, and Darkspawn|
| AndAgain chapter 41 . 1/20
UHG OH MY GOSH HOW IS THERE NOT MORE OF THIS WHAT HAPPENED WHY DID YOU STOP IT'S SOOO GOOOOOOD
*cries a lot*
| Tirion I chapter 6 . 11/14/2013
Damn, no Tabris. It's a pity, I actually hoped they'd pick him up at Denerim.
| Salinea chapter 41 . 10/19/2013
I just have to say I love love LOVE this story. I played a human mage as well and can't really get behind reading any fic with Zevran paired with anyone else either. I'm so glad I found a fic that's actual quality when dealing with him. You make their excursions so, well, realistic and natural as if they're real people and not just characters. I have to admit I was rather pleased that a lot of Maggies decisions coincided with my playthrough but the one thing I love the most is the little world building tid bits you add here and there. They just simply make so much sense. There's a lot of things I never really considered given the confines of the game but you've given me a more solid way of looking at events. I also really wished I had read the first few chapters dealing with Jowans friendship before I ever picked up the game because doing so, I really gained a new appreciation for him. I always felt weird that they thrust this person at you claiming to be your friend and expect you to make decisions based on something that could possibly be feigned concern given your initial exposure to him is him asking you to spill the beans about the one thing you're not supposed to spill anything about. Ah, so good. If you ever get back around to working on this, I will be a very happy fan.
| Anime-StarWars-fan-zach chapter 41 . 9/25/2013
My, this is a fun little read! I love Maggie, she's quite a fun protagonist. A shame this fic hasn't updated in a year, though. Still, great work here! Keep it up! :)
| The Third Biker Scholar chapter 13 . 5/30/2013
love this and I can't wait to read the next chapters!
| Vibrolux61 chapter 41 . 3/29/2013
Great story! Will you write more chapters?
| Nirahla Shepard chapter 18 . 8/30/2012
Im taking a break from DA:O for about ten minutes, and im in the Deep Roads right now, and i cant agree more. I would skip Ruck's dialogue so i wouldnt have to listen to it. Its too creepy and disturbing...
| Kurumi Uchiha chapter 41 . 7/6/2012
I just found your story and couldn't keep myself from reading every chapter.
I loved it!
Seriously, you just made me want to replay DAO with a character similar to your unique mage. I love her! And awezome work!
And all that sexy scenes with our favourite antivan elf... Just marvelous! xD
I'll be looking forwar the newest chapters. You made me a fan of your story already!
| Corea chapter 41 . 4/26/2012
What an amazing story! The way you write all the characters is honestly just brilliant. Can't wait to see what happens next.
| Kira chapter 41 . 4/13/2012
I finally found the time to finish the last few chapters that were up, and I need more! I love this story :)
| Pint-sized She-Bear chapter 1 . 3/15/2012
I started reading this after coming across Leap and Falling earlier. This is great. You writing is awesome :) I feel so connected to your characters and it is only chapter 1. If Leap and Falling are any indication I am going to love the DA:O and DA:A stories. I am looking forward to reading NB and AOA because of Anders...I confess, I am a bit Anders obsessed haha and loved him in Awakening and even more so in DA2.
| Her Name Was Tamora chapter 41 . 2/11/2012
Yaaaay! I just re-read the entire story. I love AoA, but had forgotten most of this story, having read it ages ago. Love it now more than ever, and THRILLED that you're keeping it going!
And it's just so darn SWEET. While also sexy. And hilarious. And intense. And... yeah. It's Dragon Age: Origins with more character development, genuine reactions, and banter. 3
| HolyCheesus chapter 32 . 2/5/2012
Okay, im actually wetting myself in laughter at how evil Maggie is! bet Isolde will be crapping herself about how she made Alistairs life miserable and now she knows he's king mwuahaha I love poetic justice, obviously Alistair would never do anything but it's nice to know that Maggie's scared Isolde with the knowledge of what could happen for her sending him away lol
| Miltonia chapter 41 . 2/5/2012
hm, can't imagine why matthias seems familiar :P
again, you write zevran so perfectly, I can hear him talk. aww, and look there, he is about to be presented with a looted gift...never really thought about that but now that you mention it...lol.
but I guess nice antivan boots don't fall out of the sky, so looting is alright.
looking forward to more (maggie giving him the boots and his...thanks. maybe? :P)
excellent, as always!
| naomis8329 chapter 41 . 2/4/2012
Laughing hysterically, I must agree at how romantic it was to loot Zev a present lol.
I love the banter between them all how they all seem to just fit. Its such great fun.
Thanks for this hun.
Hope you are well