Reviews for Achiot
Catmint chapter 1 . 12/1/2012
This is beautiful, heartbreaking, sad, sweet and wonderfully tender. You've got them down beautifully and it's so sweet, the way he just knows what to do. Wonderful, warming writing.
Amilyn chapter 1 . 6/6/2012
Nice reflection on how much this case was too close to home.
JoBelle chapter 1 . 4/10/2012
I really like that he waited for her permission to sit next to her, Ziva's so fiercely independent and Tony was being respectful there which is really nice to see. I liked the look at Tali and Ziva's relationship, I think you did a really nice job of what it might have been like from the little we've been told. Tony and Ziva's dialogue as always is spot on! I could hear her snapping at him when he came in and his very serious response in return. I would have liked a scene like this in the episode very much. Very nice job! :)
Uijc chapter 1 . 8/13/2010
Very well written, I liked the concept and loved the story!
13NCISgirl chapter 1 . 8/13/2010
looks good!
M E Wofford chapter 1 . 8/13/2010
Good story.

I only wish we could have seen something like that on the show.

Maybe something like this would have prevented Rivkin and Somalia.
Betherzz chapter 1 . 8/13/2010
good beginning to the story, cant wait to see where it goes from here and what things the 2 end up talking about
DoveFeathersAndSnowFlurries chapter 1 . 8/12/2010
awwwww :( poor ziva... awesome story though!