|Reviews for Achiot|
| Catmint chapter 1 . 12/1/2012
This is beautiful, heartbreaking, sad, sweet and wonderfully tender. You've got them down beautifully and it's so sweet, the way he just knows what to do. Wonderful, warming writing.
| Amilyn chapter 1 . 6/6/2012
Nice reflection on how much this case was too close to home.
| JoBelle chapter 1 . 4/10/2012
I really like that he waited for her permission to sit next to her, Ziva's so fiercely independent and Tony was being respectful there which is really nice to see. I liked the look at Tali and Ziva's relationship, I think you did a really nice job of what it might have been like from the little we've been told. Tony and Ziva's dialogue as always is spot on! I could hear her snapping at him when he came in and his very serious response in return. I would have liked a scene like this in the episode very much. Very nice job! :)
| Uijc chapter 1 . 8/13/2010
Very well written, I liked the concept and loved the story!
| 13NCISgirl chapter 1 . 8/13/2010
| M E Wofford chapter 1 . 8/13/2010
I only wish we could have seen something like that on the show.
Maybe something like this would have prevented Rivkin and Somalia.
| Betherzz chapter 1 . 8/13/2010
good beginning to the story, cant wait to see where it goes from here and what things the 2 end up talking about
| DoveFeathersAndSnowFlurries chapter 1 . 8/12/2010
awwwww :( poor ziva... awesome story though!