Reviews for Wish You were Here
zenbon zakura chapter 2 . 8/16/2010
MissSapphireRose chapter 2 . 8/16/2010
Cute ending! The suits! The poor damaged suits! Hehe. Great work!
MLEetc chapter 2 . 8/15/2010
Yay! Now this made me very happy. I like the whole "Give me a six" thing when he tries to make his decision. I didn't really understand what that girl was talking about when she recognized his eyes. Is Ariadne really such a good artist that she can make a drawing look like a photo? But besides that I definitely felt closure. Thank you so much for listening to my review! And I'm going to go read Safety in the Darkness now. :)
mustikas chapter 2 . 8/15/2010
Haah the story is much more awesome now! :) Nicely done!
uno mega chapter 2 . 8/15/2010
Yaaaaay! :D
MLEetc chapter 1 . 8/14/2010
Sad ending. Cliff hanger! You should add another chapter and give it some closure. I'm intrigued, but I wouldn't consider this a good story by itself, it needs some depth and not as much surrounding the song. (Good song though, by the way.) This has promise! Make it better!
xlostscream chapter 1 . 8/13/2010
I started tearing up when Ariadne entered the warehouse.. :'(

Anyhow, I think this is amazing.
uno mega chapter 1 . 8/13/2010
Are you going to continue this? :'(
mustikas chapter 1 . 8/13/2010
I love it! Genius!
zenbon zakura chapter 1 . 8/13/2010

dumb arthur go get her!
MissSapphireRose chapter 1 . 8/13/2010
Oooooooh. I like it! Another chapter could work, but it's really. Up to you, either way works
cian rhyme chapter 1 . 8/12/2010
I love this so much. I have nothing constructive to say, I just love the originality of it :)