|Reviews for Truths, Lies and Alibis|
| dont1855 chapter 29 . 12/20/2011
That my friend was SOOOOO BEAUTIFUL I just cried I'm so happy for them Thank YOU SO MUCH FOR THIS HAPPY STORY after ALL the BAD thing's that have happen to them this is what they need GOOD JOB :) DEBBIE
| dont1855 chapter 21 . 12/16/2011
I'm ready now go KICK THERE ASS I hope they don't hurt Bella Hate to see the fucker when Edward get's ahold of him GOOD JOB NOW OFF I GO TO READ see ya :) DEBBIE I KNEW IT WAS JACK
| dont1855 chapter 16 . 12/16/2011
YA put me in with a night in the loft with EDWARD HELL put me in a hole WEEK heheheh I'm glad that they are going to start being a couple about time I think Reynolds is a SICK bastard BUT I DON'T trust him one bit I know he's not done with Bella :) DEBBIE
| dont1855 chapter 8 . 12/14/2011
YA I'm thinking the same way allot of other's are SHE DIDN'T TELL HIM THE WHOLE TRUTH ETHER SO WHAT THE HELL HE SHOULD JUST SAY FUCK IT AND LEAVE HER TO TAKE CARE OF HER SELF SHE BEING A BABY SHE SHOULD AT LEST SEE IT FROM HIS SIDE THIS IS ALL FUCK UP I HOPE IT GET'S BETTER I dont like Bella being a BABY ( POOR ME ) And YES EDWARD IS HURT She makes it look like she use him :( DEBBIE
| dont1855 chapter 4 . 12/13/2011
I just loved it BUT how sad it's going to be when they BOTH find out the TRUTH Let's hope they get through it Thank's again GOOD JOB :) DEBBIE
| dont1855 chapter 3 . 12/13/2011
HO SHIT I'M going to cry when she find's out about him WHY HO WHY didn't you tell her EDWARD You know it well come out PLEASE JUST DON'T LIE even though you ALREADY HAVE GOOD JOB girlfriend NOW back to the story heheheh :) Debbie
| dont1855 chapter 1 . 12/13/2011
SO ya here I am told ya that I would be reading this next i do think I'm gong to like this one to LOOK'S like a fun one :) DEBBIE
| lola0930 chapter 28 . 11/2/2011
okay the sentencing was harsh. I don't approve of the death penalty. But that's not what we're here for! It's your story, one that I'm reading voluntarily and for fun! if this were a political appeal or something, yeah it would be totally differen't. But it's a just a story!
It's also just a minor part of the story I think. The major part is jacob (thank god it was him :-) ) and james being caught or killed and edward and bella finding their happy ever after. Since you didn't write chapter after chapter on the subject, and you didn't dwell on it you made it minor and therefor easy to read.
It's a part of life,one that's legal in some states and did people give you flack for killing james, for using violence in your story? I highly doubt that. How's that fair?
I read it quite a bit that when authors go a certain way reviewers get nasty. I really don't get that. It's just a story that someone is writing for fun and it's their 'baby'. Who are we to critisize this? I understand constructive criticism about grammar, I do. But flaming an author about a direction the story is taking, I don't. Just stop reading!
If I don't like a story, I stop reading and that's generally because of bad grammar or a bad story line (like endless smut).
Hope your reviewers weren't too mean about the decision to go with this punishment!
| lola0930 chapter 10 . 10/31/2011
the accomplice is Jacob. it has to be. I want it to be :)
Because I think it's nice that Jessica is a nice person for a change. And I never want Jacob to be a nice person, unless he is gay in the story or happily married. So, while I'm stating my case I realise there's no point. You've already finished the story so there's no influencing for me to do :)
| CoppertopJ chapter 32 . 9/27/2011
Bravo for an outstanding story. It possessed all of the elements to lure in the reader, and addict them instantly.
You did such a magnificent job with this story, the polyvore and the blogspot. Very impressive.
| CoppertopJ chapter 24 . 9/26/2011
Phew, thank God Bella is a good shot. Nicely done my dear. Can't wait to finish, but for now, off to bed.
| CoppertopJ chapter 22 . 9/26/2011
FUCK, FUCK, FUCK...I was sitting here wondering if Jacob was going south, and they knew Reynolds was headed to San Quentin (south again), why in the hell there was not beefed up security on that transfer.
FUCK, FUCK, FUCK.
| CoppertopJ chapter 17 . 9/26/2011
Chelsea, Chelsea, Chelsea, ever hear of KARMA?
Loved, loved, loved this chapter.
| MelodySong231 chapter 2 . 9/25/2011
EEEEEEEE! I'm gigling like a giddy school girl! haha
| CoppertopJ chapter 15 . 9/25/2011
Okay, I'm picturing all kinds of medieval tortures for Garrett and Kate. Lots, and lots of them.
Thank God she finally told Edward she loved him.