|Reviews for My Heart, In Segments|
| Allstarall chapter 1 . 6/13/2018
A wow on Berwald’s parenting and Peter’s awareness. Fin’s and Berwald’s re-relationship was smooth.
| sugoiauriga chapter 9 . 10/20/2017
| sugoiauriga chapter 6 . 10/20/2017
FAVE PART SERIOUSLY
| un-named-2019 chapter 10 . 11/27/2016
I loved the quotes you put up. I also loved how realistic it was. You didn't make them the perfect, poster family; you made them a real family.
| Guest chapter 10 . 7/30/2016
| peteradnan chapter 10 . 6/5/2016
That was really good! I rarely ever see hanatama family fics with teenager Sea, and you pulled that off really nicely!
| Tea chapter 10 . 6/5/2016
| Starsearl chapter 10 . 2/15/2016
The approach you took on this story was nothing more than mere perfection!
A SuFin family fanfic looking more to a real-life situation than a solid complete answer; the effect of a tattered relationship, healing, the focus on the father-son relationship (without "m'wife" in play), and an open-ended story was in full play to lift this story to new heights.
This is a first for me to exercise my mind on a new story-arch and a fresh breathe from err... others.
A beautiful story written by a beautiful (sadly inactive) author! One who makes such a story like "Treatment" (my favorite SuFin fanfic yet though sadly abandoned) comes to creating a whole new setting and a more developed cast of characters. The factors of this story all topple together to create another masterpiece taking a step away from the norm and bringing about new thought and questions for readers to wonder.
I'll stop my rambling here and say "FIRST" to comment in 2016 :D (I couldn't resist) !
| Guest chapter 10 . 8/18/2015
This is such a Swedish like story. With something more than love and affection, it's simply life itself. Whimsical, in every sense of the word.
It actually makes me remember the Swedish movies. The way you wrote, made every scene look like an authentic Nordic story.
Loved it, good job.
| SheWhoLeavesCrappyReviews chapter 10 . 5/26/2015
This really brought out the emotions in me. Berwald's the character that I feel I can relate the most to, and I love you for the way you portrayed him.
I'm so happy to find a fic that focuses on a father and son relationship and actually develops their characters without making it too dramatic. It just seems more genuine that way.
Also, as much as I love sappy romance fics, this was a nice break from all the exaggerated stories I find.
| thatweirdgirl-98 chapter 10 . 5/19/2015
This was so cute~! You should totes make a sequel where Tino and Berwald get back together!
| Raihannn chapter 10 . 3/18/2015
whoah. Whoaaaah. Hands down for the best SuFin AU I've ever read. This is the best, I love it, cheers to the author for such an amazing work.
| ooooohehe chapter 10 . 1/14/2015
I loved that so much oh my god.
| ahappygoat chapter 10 . 8/27/2014
awww i loved this, too damn cute! and i love how you left the ending "uncertain" because means i can make my own ending for tino and berwald, because frankly i didnt want tino back . i fucking love tino but in this story i was more content with leaving it at berwald and peter OuO at least until peter is old ...
| ahappygoat chapter 5 . 8/27/2014
oh ok nevermind.