|Reviews for My Heart, In Segments|
| KingdomKuroGeass chapter 10 . 8/9/2012
nawww :) i luved it :D!
| Autumnwind13 chapter 10 . 8/1/2012
Beautiful! I really admired the use of quotes at the beginning of every segment, too.
| Druekee chapter 10 . 8/1/2012
Oh. Oh wow. I loved this so much! It felt so real, and so in character.
Tino didn't immediately fall for/like Berwald in canon and it made Berwald seem overbearing- similar to what happened in your story. It felt real from that aspect and from Peter's influence on Berwald's life and vice versa. Another person can really do that when you need them to.
Tino's reaction to how it all played through was remarkably realistic- most people would've had the same reaction and done basically the same thing. Peter was extraordinarily likable and adorable- the little things really added up on his part. The whole story had a sad vibe but as it progressed the sadness started fading into hope.
The ending wasn't fairytale perfect but it left the reader feeling like happiness has come and the whole thing felt wrapped up. Although an epilogue would've been nice haha. I'm still interested to see if Tino would've come back to Berwald or if they both just comfortably remained friends. I suppose it's all for the reader to decide.
I realize that this was written nearly 2 years ago, but I still wanted to express my utmost adoration for this work of fiction.
| HELP chapter 8 . 6/8/2012
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| TheIrishHobbit chapter 10 . 5/9/2012
What a wonderful story!
Thank you your work is beautiful and it makes me want to go read your other work now.
| Vanessa E chapter 1 . 3/24/2012
Just thought I should drop a review for this before I go ahead and read this for about the fifth time! This story is amazing, such a well written and well thought story. It's very hard to find good plot driven FF and it's just so wobderful to read a story dedicated to a non romantic relationship! 33 now off to read this wonderful story :)
| MelancholyMadness chapter 10 . 3/11/2012
This was really well done! Your writing style was unique and for the time I read it I was completely absorbed in it. I feel so sorry for Peter! You did a great job writing him and I loved his relationship with Berwald. The ending scene was really cute with those two. On the SuFin side, another job well done. You managed to incorporate their unique style of relationship and made it seem easy. This story was really good. Thanks! :D
| DotTheAmazing chapter 10 . 1/17/2012
D'aww. I like that it isn't all okay at the end, because life doesn't always turn out okay.
And the USUK made me cry inside. *sob*
| UrsulaP chapter 10 . 1/12/2012
Sometimes I read fanfic that's better than many of the professionally published stories I've read. This was one of those times. I hope you're out there getting paid for writing now.
| Grey Pezzola chapter 10 . 11/26/2011
I was kinda dubious when I started reading this, but honestly, this was adorable. I've melted into a little puddle of fluffy goo.
| cylobaby chapter 10 . 11/24/2011
| Tweaks chapter 10 . 11/11/2011
Ohhhh my goodness, I did NOT want this to end! Perhaps one of the most entertaining and well written fics I have ever read! So beautiful, so charming. Amazing job!
| NotSpecialNobody chapter 10 . 9/3/2011
I loved this story so much. It is by far the most realistic SuFin fic I've read and it made me tear up a little, especially when Peter spoke about Alfred and Arthur. It was also great to read about a slightly older Peter, childlike Sealand was starting to tick me off anyway. And the relationship with Berwald and Tino was so sweet, but so imperfect, which made it all the more heartwarming.
I'm glad that everything turned out good in the end, with Peter living with Berwald and Tino speaking to his soon-to-be-husband again (sorry, couldn't help it). And I find it cute that Berwald choked on his drink after Peter talked about asking someone out. It couldn't be Raivis, could it?
To sum things up, I just want to thank you for providing us with such a beautiful fic. Tino, Berwald and Peter have never been this human-like. :)
| Diglossia chapter 10 . 8/10/2011
This was amazing. Really, really amazing. Thank you so much.
| chobi x chapter 10 . 7/22/2011
Was reading this during the drive to our vacaction location on my cell and I have to say wow. Awesome story. I loved it.