Reviews for Nighttime Wishing
Ouch Charlie chapter 1 . 10/30/2010
I loved it!

i loved how they both wished for the same thing!

very smart(:
MadameCissy chapter 1 . 10/30/2010
As unlikely as it seems for these two to stand gazing at the sky together there is a deeper meaning in this :-) Keep on writing.
Zombie Reine chapter 1 . 10/6/2010
Out of Character, certainly.

Very cute one-shot, definitely.

Did the misspelling of Gryffindor bug me? A tiny bit.

Other than that I thought it was a splendid story. Well done.

Rei
QueenKira chapter 1 . 9/22/2010
Aw, that was cute.
DramioneLurver chapter 1 . 9/19/2010
Aw, how sweet. They're a bit OOC in my opinion, but the general idea and the wishing is very cute. By the way, you spelled Gryffindor wrong. :D
Dream of Many Dreams chapter 1 . 9/9/2010
I'm sure you have been told, but it is GRYFFINDOR. Now, other than that is was cute. Bit OOC for Hermione, but I liked it nonetheless. So good job! :)

Though I would watch you tenses -

Hermione leans against the balcony as she looks up at the sky. Her face shows traces of fatigue but you can see in the moonlight a faint yet visible smile upon her face.

The tense of these to sentances controdict the rest of the story. It should be -

Hermione leaned against the balcony, as she looked up at the sky. Her face showed traces of fatigue, but you could see in the moonlight a faint, yet visible, smile upon her face.

Just grammar stuff, no biggy really, as your idea come through just fine.

Good job, and keep writing!
lilylou101 chapter 1 . 8/26/2010
It's Gryffindor, lol. It was really cute, I liked it. Great job!
xOff-with-the-nargelsx chapter 1 . 8/14/2010
That was good i loved it.

i noticed that in all you're harry potter fanfics you keep making the same mistake

it's gryffindor not grithindor.
Princess.Nemo chapter 1 . 8/13/2010
I loved it! :)

Just one thing, it's gryffindor not grithindor.

Other than that it was very nice :D

xxx