|Reviews for Artemis Fowl and the Other Hunter|
| Secca Irises chapter 3 . 8/27/2010
It made me so frustrated that they never addressed this in the book. Thank you for writing! I hope to see the next chapter soon
| LameGuest12 chapter 3 . 8/26/2010
OMG! This is so so good! Please can you wright the last chapter!
| XxEviexX chapter 3 . 8/25/2010
A few things.
First of all, I laughed out loud too many times to count during this chapter. Your fours are EPIC wins, I love how you gave them little giggling personalities. :) I also especially loved the beginning with the interaction between Orion and his "odious other." :D And I love how speechless Artemis gets at Orion's stupidity hehehe.
Just two things. One I think that the quote is "Trolls in a tantrum cause terrible trouble" and not "Trolls cause terrible trouble in a tantrum." The second is I think Artemis' dialogue is a bit off at times, like at this point: "May I endeavour to hug you?" That just seems like an awkward thing to say, sort of like he's (or you're) trying to fit in big words everywhere. Most of the time it's great, but it's just sometimes that it's slightly off.
I am REALLY looking forward to the rest of this story-it's so fun! :)
| America's Ham chapter 3 . 8/25/2010
| K189 chapter 3 . 8/24/2010
The part where Butler is dragged behind the shutle is very much like the scene where Julius was dragged behind the ambassador's ship ' like an extreme surfer ' in the Arctic Incident. And I have found miniscule, little faults in your story, but over all it is nice.
| Eluveitie's Slania chapter 3 . 8/24/2010
Go on Holly, kick those fours' asses ;-)
I lol'd at this. Repeatedly. Your writing is brilliant; please update very soon!
| charleyreede chapter 1 . 8/24/2010
haha this is cute:)
lol if i didn't know any better i'd think this was a slash ficcie between Artemis and Orion;)
| xXWingedWerefoxXx chapter 3 . 8/23/2010
I laughed so many times while reading this, especially at the "May I endeavor to hug you?" part. I think you do a great job at portraying Artemis and Orion. Now all we need is for them to start slapping each other and some popcorn (btw, how many calories does brain food have? XD).
| silverphoenix chapter 3 . 8/23/2010
Grr... Just get on with THE TALK already! But this chapter was great too, Orion just cracks me up! But my favorite part was the "How would you like to spend the rest of your days, employed as my cerebral bodyguard?" LOL.
| PyroSpikyHair chapter 3 . 8/23/2010
Whoo! That was awesome! Oh, how I love Orion! You get their characters perfectly!Great!
| Lady Recondite chapter 3 . 8/22/2010
this was really funny. :))
| Redbookbluebook chapter 3 . 8/22/2010
Loved it; from the kiss of life, to Artemis's proposal, to endeavouring to get a hug but being too nervous to take it, and rejecting Orion. Looking forward to the next chapter!
| Victoria of Memphis chapter 3 . 8/22/2010
Hey!Looking forward to the next update, Sakina!
| LittleJames chapter 3 . 8/21/2010
This story is great! Good diolouge, great description, great everything! It made me luagh alot. You really get into the characters well. Do hasten to update$
| Random chapter 3 . 8/21/2010
This is so good! I love it! Please continue!