|Reviews for GreenEyed Monster|
| MissApple17 chapter 1 . 8/23/2013
Loved it! Lisbon jealous was a fun thing to read!
Great job ;)
| wisegirl71301 chapter 1 . 7/29/2013
OMG AWESOME SAUCE
| mentalistlover1698 chapter 1 . 1/17/2013
Aw I just loved this! My favorite story I've read so far! I loved the way Jane defended Lisbon to Laura on their date. I also loved the ending when Jane was describing everything he loved about Lisbon :) Such a different twist amd wonderful story...I wouldn't change a thing about it..PERFECT!
| wimmer511 chapter 1 . 10/1/2012
Oh no, no Lisbon. This is what gets me through the day. Nothing gets my blood up like fending off your elegant and well-crafted verbal attacks. Like those times you told me to bite you, they made me feel alive."
"So all I have to do is stop talking to you and you'll drop dead? All my problems will be solved."
"You and I both know you don't mean that. You'd miss my off-the-wall comedic japery, not to mention my good looks."
"Why don't we give it a try and see how it goes? Drop me a line in twenty years or so, I'll bet my life will go on with or without you in it."
"Sure, if you call that living."
All I can say is soooo funny! Nicely done on this. I enjoyed it immensely.
| GyMusicAddict chapter 1 . 9/17/2012
I love stories like this! It was really cute and I don't think you wrote them too OOC. :)
| Lothlorien Aeterna chapter 1 . 1/15/2012
| csiAngel chapter 1 . 3/18/2011
Fluff is indeed fun. I love jealous-Lisbon :) A great fic!
| ScientificAnomaly chapter 1 . 1/9/2011
Oh please to god write more fluff! And more stories like this, I loved it! x
| AngelOfDeath07 chapter 1 . 8/26/2010
Awww! This is just too sweet :)
I loved how jealous Libson was and how sweet Jane was at the end... now why cant they just get together on the show?
| Jbon chapter 1 . 8/14/2010
AWesome story - big grin on my face - if only huh!
| Jisbon4ever chapter 1 . 8/13/2010
At first I felt sorry for Laura(because we share a name and the attraction to Jane. lol) But I'm glad they broke it up. Seriously, Jane belongs to Lisbon. Thanks for posting,
| lysjelonken chapter 1 . 8/13/2010
Amazing! Loves it! Write more, write more! :)
| Frogster chapter 1 . 8/13/2010
That was fantastic! I loved it! Very well-written. I liked Laura's character in spite of myself. I think everyone can empathize with first-day jitters, so I guess that made her seem a little more human, and not just some minx out to get Jane.
Loved Lisbon's point of view, how at first she denied all affection for Jane (typical Lisbon) but how she still confronted Jane and Laura.
Absolutely loved Jane and Lisbon's mini banter session, especially the part where Jane said "This is what gets me through the day. Nothing gets my blood up like fending off your elegant and well-crafted verbal attacks. Like those times you told me to bite you, they made me feel alive." :D
And Lisbon's retort was one of the best I've ever seen/read: "So all I have to do is stop talking to you and you'll drop dead? All my problems will be solved." XD
Love Lisbon's realization that she loves Jane, and all the feelings of her jealousy, especially the part about his smile always being for her.
So Jane talks about Lisbon all the time ;) A little surprised, but not much. I guess it's because we don't see much of the team's life outside of work.
Love the fluffy, happy ending! sighs I really needed that right now! :D
Write more soon!
| yaba chapter 1 . 8/13/2010
That was cute! I liked Laura, poor misled girl though, she obviously didn't know the unspoken rule in the CBI that Jane is already taken :P. Great little ficlet!