|Reviews for Betwixt|
| Ash-Bookworm113 chapter 6 . 11/17/2013
Honestly this is a great fic :)
| charm13insomnia chapter 6 . 8/6/2013
| LadyDeath39 chapter 1 . 3/27/2013
Just finished the first chapter and had to post you to let you know you did a great job, it all flowed and was easy to follow with not to much background info getting in the way it was very well set out, on to the next chapter :D
| Guest chapter 1 . 3/27/2013
Just finished the first chapter and I have to say it was a great intro,
| blackbloodywolf chapter 6 . 1/21/2013
this was well written
| Guest chapter 6 . 12/16/2012
I really enjoyed this story. The plot was great. the only problem i had was it felt a little rushed and it left some things opened ended. Overall, i loved the story it just needs more attention to detail
| DeanBeans13 chapter 6 . 12/4/2012
This was an interesting story. I liked it however I had one problem. Though teh pairing was a Harry and Jacob, and the genre was romance, the story was more of a Harry centric-family story and only focused on the love portion more heavily in the last two chapters. Even then it seemed more like the background to other things. I was expecting to see more of the romance develop form both their ends while the background (not too far in the back because I know family is important to Harry) would be the family and the issues in England. I was expecting more Jacob point of view that would have solidified the romance. In this, he just seems like an afterthought.
| cethmistmyk chapter 6 . 9/11/2012
I love it! It is 'what it SHOULD be like' rather than what the authors imagined... I like those stories, occasionally... :-D
| Guest chapter 6 . 7/9/2012
| Purplehonor chapter 6 . 7/1/2012
I absolutely loved this story. Two things I would add are: more H/Jacob as far as more converstations and inner workings of their relationship and more H/Jasper as far as creating familial ties, we didn't really get alot of that other than a few sentences. Overall this is a wonderful story and I really enjoyed it. I would love to read more... Maybe a look into their lives in twenty years or so.
| Lizzii-STALKER of DARKNESS chapter 6 . 6/24/2012
Hello! so your story was absolutely amazing! I loved the realness you added to Edward and Bella's relationship an I'm so glad this story hijacked you into it becoming so long. I love that it had a proper ending and that things work out. Amazing Job.
| Erena Nura chapter 4 . 6/6/2012
I love the story so far. It has the potential to be really great.
I happened to notice a few minor grammar errors that I personally can't ignore. It is my form of ocd. First, your use of the words believe and relief are incorrect. In the phrase Hermione's believes the word "beliefs" should be inserted. When using belief and relief as nouns spell them as above. Also when using the word "off" as in "turn off the light" there are two f's. Its little things like these that can distract readers and make a story with great potential like yours just another story on fanfiction. Sorry about only reviewing about grammer!
| Safiiri chapter 6 . 3/28/2012
Loved the story, thought it was really well done. Any chance of a sequel to see what happens with Bella/Edward?
| U Kno U Luv Anna chapter 3 . 3/26/2012
Love the story!
| U Kno U Luv Anna chapter 2 . 3/25/2012
Good chappie. I have read this before, but I like it so much I will continue reading it.