Reviews for Twinkle in the Sky
Wild-hair Eir chapter 1 . 7/9/2015
Aww, that was so cute! /melted
xXxWolvesInTheNightxXx chapter 1 . 7/28/2013
Awww loved this!
sdsdagthbfgedf chapter 1 . 2/8/2013
This killed me.

I LOVE IT. :DD So cute
sayume214 chapter 1 . 8/23/2012
This was nice and sweet. It was cute and enjoyable.

It could have been better, though. As a oneshot, this was probably the way to go, but the story could have shone more if set up as a multichapter fic. For example, rather than just narrating in some parts, making them part of the dialogue and inner monologues would have been better and more captivating. We only know Nobuta came to acknowledge her own feelings, but it would have been more memorable if you had narrated the one moment or event that made her come to this result.
JangMiSong chapter 1 . 2/19/2012
I love how you added Rina and Aoki and Yamapi in there XD I would be laughing really loudly if it weren't the middle of the night. Very well written, I loved it!
Heion'Na chapter 1 . 2/6/2012
This was really well written and you did a fantastic job portraying the characters :)) Good job!
BadAuthor-inactive chapter 1 . 10/10/2011
so sweeeeet :3

i love stories like this, so sappy and wonderful
Andrew's Prod chapter 1 . 5/31/2011
I love your story, hopefully huviera ends: ) still write us stories I love akiraxnobuko _
Ice's butterfly's chapter 1 . 3/11/2011
I adored, and I loved the ending! I loved the different faces of the passing Nobuta to realize that he loved Akira. The Mariko/Shuuji-kun I also liked how she making matchmaker with her friend. The ending is poignant, especially with the passage where he confesses without her (one of the parties most moving series)

lildragongurl chapter 1 . 2/17/2011
Lols! I laughed so hard at the kenzou part!

Because we all know kenzou is acted by yamapi, The actor for akira!

I like this story, it's so sweet and felt real.

And on the plus note, I can totally imagine akira panting with his bag down blah blah. The scene is so perfect in my head! Write more please!
majinga chapter 1 . 10/9/2010
what a cute story!

Aside from giving justice to the Akira x Nobuko pairing, you wrote the story in such a way that when you read it, you feel that it's a part edited out from the drama (which is a pity of course, if ever the real writers intended to add such).

good job!
JangoTRON chapter 1 . 8/26/2010
"Akira down." hahaha

great story. i loved how you described their emotions and how they looked like, it gave the story a greater shape than it already had...(if that makes sense to you o.O) hahaha
b.aka-chan xD chapter 1 . 8/22/2010
sooo cute *-*