|Reviews for Discussions|
| smallvillegirl1822 chapter 1 . 4/7/2016
"crappy ones"?! you just shut down the entire damn fight they had for like three books. They literally fought about that damn soul thing for like their entire relationship. If you were in the books as a character you could've ended that shit in like 5 minutes. I think this one is my favorite of the 2 I've read so far. Also so far my life is changing before my eyes and I might get attached to your characters and force you to write more chapters.
P.S. You rock my socks
| Dreadful Oblivion chapter 1 . 3/26/2015
Very goon n fluffy and don't mind but I can't see Edward believing Bella cuz of a definition in a dictionary...
Also as we're doing story writing in the school, here are some useful pointers which I think ur story lacks:
Adjectives: his pale, white hand
Adverbs: he scoffed, not believing me
Using vivid verbs like he gobbled up,etc,etc
But on the whole... Very sweet n fluffy
| paulineta chapter 1 . 1/1/2011
It's not crappy, it's pretty and very lovely. Adn Edward is such a cheater!
But a cute, lovely cheater, that is...
I really liked it
| Kelly Cvetkova chapter 1 . 12/14/2010
I cant believe it i have read this story before. and i didnt even bother to go to your profile. man was i an idiot. (palm to face) keep up the awesome writing