Reviews for Glitch in the System
ZabuzasGirl chapter 1 . 6/6/2013
Update immediately, please!Update immediately, please!
Watcher in the dark chapter 19 . 10/17/2012
This would make a great movie.
Watcher in the dark chapter 20 . 10/14/2012
Sequel! Sequel!
Hoopla chapter 1 . 3/2/2012
Sir, I salute you and your epic writing skills!
Grey11893 chapter 3 . 6/16/2011
This story is awesome and i havent even finished reading it yet! Please keep on writing!
Toa Allanon chapter 20 . 6/10/2011
Amazing story. I remember reading it back on bzpower, though I don't remember that last chapter being in it. Komas is definitely my favorite character from this story.
InTheLight-Hija chapter 20 . 12/23/2010
What a great way to wrap it up. Still, I'm sad that it's over

:(

This story was awesome from the beginning! You should be very proud of it. It should also have waaay more reviews than this. I love all the characters you made and how they all seem so... real.

Great job!

~Light1396
InTheLight-Hija chapter 19 . 12/23/2010
Oh I love this chapter. Mainly because of all the fluff, and Komas SCORES! Victory for him, yay! I was very surprised when she actually kissed him. So was he, wasn't he? XD

Still, this was a very heartfelt chapter. Komas' awakening was funny, too.

~Light1396
InTheLight-Hija chapter 17 . 12/22/2010
Hey, you've updated again! Nice.

By now you must think I use the word 'suspense' waaay too much... so I'll just say amazing instead. :D This chapter was VERY suspen- amazing. Had my heart pounding hard, no joke.

I mean seriously, the 'android' Szian was acting like a mad scientist! *shudders* And that last bit at the end... wow. That's new.

I'll most likley finish the rest of your updates tomorrow. Till then!

~Light1396
InTheLight-Hija chapter 16 . 10/5/2010
Oh, wow, Tachi... big mistake in leaving like that. Aw, I just wanna hug Komas! Poor guy. But now she's found Szian and he's got her. *gasp* Suspense if I ever saw it...

The way this Szian talks is so creepy and his character is so different than what I'd expected. He really is a great character, you know. I really love this story, and I can't wait for more!

~Light1396
InTheLight-Hija chapter 15 . 10/4/2010
Aww, we almost had it! But Tachi had to pull away...!

You've managed another great chapter. I just KNEW they would be saved somehow, one way or the other. And that remark about Komas' heart was too funny. XD I can't wait to see more.

~Light1396
Lady Kags chapter 14 . 10/3/2010
thank you very much; sorry it took me awhile to update, considering I already have this written. Don't worry, updating today so you can see what happens next!
InTheLight-Hija chapter 14 . 10/3/2010
...You are an awesome writer.

Seriously! Everything you write paints a clear picture in my mind. The struggle with the, shall we say, bad guys was very epic. And now we have a cliffhanger of doom! Oh, I can't wait to see what happens next.

Keep it up!

~Light1396
InTheLight-Hija chapter 13 . 10/3/2010
Another wonderfully written chappie. The hacking into the Makuta servent reminds me of... something... hmm. I really enjoyed this one. Poor little Crunchbite...

~Light1396
InTheLight-Hija chapter 12 . 10/3/2010
Yay, updates! First off, the first line was priceless. :D Komas is plain awesome. His character is so entertaining and fun to read! And I liked their little love convo. Poor Komas... I move on to read more!

~Light1396
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