|Reviews for Catching Up to You|
| Les chapter 1 . 10/28/2014
This is really good
| 348joey chapter 1 . 2/3/2014
"Brendan was once more in his native region of Hoenn." But the player character isn't native to Hoenn. Remember? The game starts in a moving van?
"The Ghost and Bug type made a hollow hissing sound that sounded oddly close to laughter." This reminded me of Toothless's laughing sound from Gift of the Night Fury, but I suppose most nonhuman laughing sounds do.
Steven and the Champion status is the same in Ruby as it is in Emerald. The only real difference to the story is that you have to stop Team Magma from erupting a volcano and later stop them from using Groudon to expand the land. Team Aqua helps you with this.
| NekoKitty13 chapter 2 . 12/27/2012
Aww that was so cute XD!
| insanityisablessedgift chapter 2 . 8/1/2012
i liked it! it was really good! make more please!
| A Midsummer Night's Dream chapter 2 . 5/7/2012
Champions seems to have the ability to disappear as swiftly as they could once they beat the League and escape their boring responsibility. Though Hoen Champions is much more flighty. Look at Steven! He gave the responsibility to Wallace as soon as Brendan returned it to him and escaped to the caves for his precious stones. The Kanto Champion Red isolated himself in for three years(or six now?)and his excuse? training. Though I'm curious to what Ethan and Lyra occupy themselves. Did they lock themselves in a convenient cave, mountain or tree? Probably not. Brendan didn't and he met them. Battle Towers, maybe?
-snicker- I really like how you gathered all early games together and the -unspoken- rule about training the native pokemon to make a team from scratch to battle was fantastic.I can imagine Brendan wanting to unleash his Swampert just to wipe away the smug smirk from guy can get on anyone's nerves while the silent Red is a different 's aura just screams unbeatable! You can feel it.
I like the fact that you used the games' Brendan/Yuki and made it work with May/Haruka(Gotta love japanese names). It's nice to see them even if I admit, the possibly-gay-but-not-really Ruby is hilarious especially if you count wild-girl Sapphire to the equation. Those two are growing on me like fungus.
| ZXCVBNMEM chapter 2 . 10/8/2011
| Hidden Lines chapter 2 . 5/1/2011
Awesomely written. One of the first Hoennshipping fics I've read that made sense.
| another reader chapter 2 . 3/31/2011
Great story, it makes more sense than most Hoennshipping fanfics. :D
| MegaTJ chapter 2 . 3/22/2011
Wow, I have to say, I am very impressed. Your writing technique has surprised me to a limit I didn't think possible. You are an above average author who has grabbed my attention. I am definitely recommending you. I truly respect you as a fellow writer. Now, this will not be the last you hear from me, so do not think I'm a completely "coo coo one time only" fan.
May good luck rain upon you and all of your stories.
| wintermuffler chapter 2 . 2/5/2011
Agh, I wish I found this sooner! Anyways, this was amazing. Your descriptions are so beautiful, and honestly - this chapter made me cry. Hahaha. It was so great. :) I've always loved this couple and this story has just ignited my love for them again.
Thank you for writing this!
| manhattan martini chapter 2 . 9/3/2010
Ffff, I only just finished reading this. And I loved it. While I think that the end was a little rushed, the chapter was gorgeous. Great work! (Especially on the descriptions. :3 )
| maria-pens chapter 2 . 8/25/2010
This story rocks. I love hoennshipping so much! You did great. :)
| MysticLyght chapter 1 . 8/18/2010
Very sweet and lloonngg
| disclaimer065 chapter 2 . 8/14/2010
I don't usually like stories set in the Game-verse, but this one I could tolerate.
Pfft, tolerate. It was exceptional! I envy your ability to paint such vivid scenes with the battles, I can just imagine them happening in my head. Also, the fluffiness was rather enjoyable, and is also something I am jealous of; I can never seem to write anything that doesn't advance the plot at least slightly(probably why I don't do oneshots).
Fantastic job. Favorited.
| manhattan martini chapter 1 . 8/14/2010
Well, well. I don't regret alerting to you in the least. Brendan/May, as you know, is one of my favorite pairings. And I wish I could write them as fluffy and as charming as this, but unfortunately I can't.
It's only the first chapter I've read, but oh it's great. Now, off to read the second.