|Reviews for Losing Control|
| Alocrion chapter 28 . 5/11/2013
genji was bad ass just too much of a dick though
| Shionomu chapter 31 . 2/6/2013
.AWESOME! I really enjoyed reading it. I have nothing that I would rate bad at this story. I used it as an inspiration for my fanfiction "Fire breaks apart". Hope you will read it! And again...FUCKING AWESOME! It's like a combination from Saw 1 and The Silence of the Lambs with Anthony Hopkins. Great Story! Great writing style! Great!
| torninside chapter 19 . 5/27/2011
Im a big fan of your work and im sorry for saying this...I WAS OK WITH TOMMY DEAD AND ALSO J.P. BUT HOW DARE YOU KILL KOICHI YOU ,YOU ...(THINKING FOR WORD) ...BASTARD-ISH PERSON ,WTF WHY HIM...keep on writing ,i just had to get that out
| PandaCath chapter 31 . 5/15/2011
A very interesting story. I had to admit I wasn't very keen on reading this at first because of the horror genre and the way most of the characters acted. But it's very well written, with very few grammatical mistakes and errors, something rare to find here.
I am very partial to AU stories and stories that bear no relevance to the original show, but this one proves an exception. 10/10
| KyaKonami chapter 31 . 12/17/2010
Nice story one of the best I have read on this whole entire site. I could actually picture this as a horror movie, that would be ten times better than saw, or any similar movie to that. Also, I love Takuya and Zoe together, so extra bonus. Though I do have to say poor Kouichi.
| utsukushii04 chapter 31 . 11/19/2010
OOOOOOHHHHHHH! She beat the crap out of her! Yeah Zoe! Woot Woot!-uh, I mean, poor girl. Sike! She deserved that! No, maybe not...whatever!
Oh, Koji cut his hair like Kouichi! I wonder how they would look if they did that in the show. I would confuse myself all the time...
Yay Hiroki and his wife are okay! Oh, the baby part was so cute!
And Miharu got a beating!
I thought both endings were equally well. This one just had Miharu hurt. I liked that. It was entertaining.
Uh, but the first ending was great too because in real life, not all the endings are happy.
So yeah, I totally LOVE this story! Wonderful and unique plot, crazy and interesting characters, and last bnut certainly not least: TAKUMI!
Great job, and I hope it works out for you _
| utsukushii04 chapter 30 . 11/19/2010
Oh my gosh! They died! O.o That was great though! You know how sometimes when things like these happen, people feel horrible, well, this is not the case! I think it was because Takuya and Zoe resolved their conflict and the way Takuya just said that he loved her made it so great! It was a great ending. Totally worth the time!
Now on to the next ending!
I know you might not get this in a while, but still...I hope all is well!
| tortureddreamer chapter 31 . 11/15/2010
Wow just wow originally I was going to pass on this story entirely do to the fact I really wasn’t in the mood for something along those lines to read. But following my gut I decided to give it a shot and was I amazed. The idea to take the entire Frontier main cast and toss them into a horror suspense story that belongs in the same category as the Saw movies was the farthest idea in my mind. I read the summery not noticing its genre so by the time I got to chapter four I was shocked to say the least. Im glad that I didn’t get hooked on it till I was done cause im sure I would have gone nuts awaiting you next upload cause I was even the my laptop couldn’t load them fast enough. I can’t tell you how many times I was sitting reading with white knuckles due to the drama of the events unfolding or how some of the detail you went into with some of the deaths. Needless to say I look forward to more of you work and will gladly fav you as an author will give your other works a shot.
| Kyosuke Nanbu chapter 31 . 11/14/2010
This one is definitely one of your best :D I loved it.
| Kyosuke Nanbu chapter 30 . 11/14/2010
Never... Fucking... Expected... That... loved it
| Kyosuke Nanbu chapter 29 . 11/14/2010
YES, JUNICHI IS FUCKING DEAD :D
me- 9/10 Minus because of the fact Kouji could pummel all he wanted but he suddenly succumbed to blood loss, after such fighting. He Should be filled with adrenaline, which would last him 4 more hours.
| Kyosuke Nanbu chapter 28 . 11/14/2010
me- HAH, That bastard is dead.
Kyo- GENJI! NOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! why... WHY!
Me- Ignore him, he thought genji and him could be best buddies at murdering. anyways, I give a 5/5 9/10 for plotline of this chapter. The only minus is why everyone didn't feel sick when the were torturing him brutally but were shocked when he died.
Kyo- 5/5, 10/10 for gore.
| bluekat21 chapter 31 . 11/14/2010
Omg. The ending to this amazing storyyy [[[: Aaah, never thought this time would come lol.
Ch 30: Did NOT see that coming. Not at all. It was a "what the heck?" moment. I felt soo dumbfounded when it turned out to be a hallucination when Junichi was killed. And then everyone else died o: aaah. Not the ending I thought would occur.
Ch 31: This was how I THOUGHT the ending would be like. But it kinda still seems like Zoe and Koji will remain affected by all this. But honestly, they have every right to be \:
In my opinion, I like the real ending. Even if I wasn't expecting it, it seemed much more like an ending for this story. And Junichi could still continue testing other subjects, which makes a person thing [:
Great story [[[: it kept a smile on my face, and an upset stomach at times everytime you updated [[: I hope you continue writing stories and one-shots.
| HeartfeltAngel chapter 31 . 11/14/2010
FUCK! NOW WHAT AM I GOING TO READ!
UGH, WHY ARE YOU SO GOOD? EVEN THE ENDINGS ARE AMAZING! AND ITS MURPHEYS LAW TO SAY THAT THE BOOKS ARE GREAT (stories, whatever) AND THEN THE ENDINGS ARE SHIT. BUT NO, YOURS ALSO HAD TO BE FUCKING AMAZING!
Takuya: *whines* Shuuutt upppp
Anyways, I love how you did the two endings! It satisfies all the needs, a need for a bloody gruesome death and an evil ending, and the ending where the slut gets the shit beaten outta her. Oh, and the ending that they get together forever, of course
Koji: Im Koichi
Zoe: Im evil
Takuya: IM STUPID!
Great job on the whole story! The only thing I found kinda annoying is, having nothing to read now : You musttttt make another gruesome bloddy death story with Takumi _ Cuz Iv read every other one, like the stalker-ish freak I am, on your profile. I know you have more hidden somewhere! *checks under Zoe's skirt* No not in there
Zoe: Hey! There are many great things in there!
Me: Nothing I dont have sweetheart
I wish I could write as good as you : I also wish I was as consistant. ... Meh.
So anyways, I will probably write another review for the other chapter, one day, because Im cool B)
| Purple Lace chapter 31 . 11/14/2010
I like the two ending, I definatly agree that the first one is more fitting, (and a better ending in my opinion) but it was nice to see the happy alternative I'm really glad you wrote both! The story is over, definatly 10/10 overall so fun to read! Can't believe I won't be looking forward to new chapter from this story anymore, but i do have your futur ones to look forward too :D