Reviews for Stray
Guest chapter 10 . 9/30/2016
that was so sickeningly perfect, i'm in tears
Karasu-LaoHu chapter 10 . 1/25/2014
I'm happy. Thank you for this!
Guest chapter 10 . 12/22/2012
yay i'm so in love with this story :)
shiznittt chapter 10 . 12/8/2010
I'm reeeeally loving your story! :D But hey, tango is from Argentina :)
blissedoutvixen chapter 10 . 11/7/2010
Aw, that was so sweet! Kisses!
brontide chapter 10 . 10/17/2010
Aww, they finally kissed. I'm sorry I always leave really stupid sounding reviews, but I love this story. I've never really given Sirius much thought when it comes to James and Lily's relationship. I guess he probably did think James wasn't any fun anymore. I absoulutly love the way you portray Sirius, and like Eliza says, 'a rebel who really just wants to be loved'.
killerbunny117 chapter 10 . 10/17/2010
YES! each chapter is better then the last. love it!
Foxtail-Padfoot chapter 10 . 10/17/2010
"Eliza, shut up." So very Sirius, and so very perfect. You're a wunderkin, Molly Raesly.
suck1t chapter 10 . 10/17/2010
Hi there again! I've just read this one, too. OC's really aren't my thing, but for some reason I've found that I tend to like stories with Sirius/(well-written)OC. I don't know why; maybe I just feel like he doesn't really mesh well romantically with any of the canon characters. Anyway, the style with the dates and all is very interesting, and I'm wondering if you're going to do a sort of time jump thing where Sirius has a chance run-in with this girl after he breaks out of Azkaban? Either way, I'm still going to continue reading. Angsty!Sirius motorbike leather jacket a good story to me!
Trisha Evenstar chapter 10 . 10/16/2010
I simply ADORE this chapter, & the quote by Plato was the icing on top! Thank you so much for writing a lovely story, I hope you continue it :)
My Letter to the World chapter 10 . 10/16/2010
This is really great!
ks chapter 10 . 10/16/2010
excellent xD I loved the ending "you're not gay are you?" lmao
libraryphiliac chapter 10 . 10/15/2010
Yes, finally, the first kiss! :) Well, it seems appropriate that Eliza will be the one to make the first move. :))))

I especially like Elizas babbling. "Youre not gay, are you?" Ha! Laughed my head off with that one. And also, her babbling BEFORE the kiss was AMAZING. I mean, amazingly hilarious. :)

But, the last two lines were uber sweet. I was like, "Aww!"

By the way, whats with the A/N?

And, lastly, how many chapters will this fic last? :)

Thanks for replying to my previous review! And thank you again for this new chapter!
the.chosen.one96 chapter 10 . 10/15/2010
Eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeekkkkkkkkk! :D
Claire lafleur chapter 10 . 10/15/2010
"87 percent certain

but you did want to kiss me, didn't you?

– I mean – boys like that, don't they?

– you 're not gay, are you?

– Oh, God, of course you're not. I'm sorry."

you are the most amazing person that I've never met. Keep writing... I'm completely sirius, don't ever stop!
the.brown.eyed.girl chapter 10 . 10/15/2010
This is the first time in the history of fanfiction that I could ever picture Sirius with anyone other than Remus. True facts.

What a marvelous piece of literature you have created!

Sorry I have never reviewed before, I simply do not know what got in to me.

Look forward to more! :]


Mystical Melody chapter 10 . 10/15/2010
Aww soo cute! :D

What's with all the smoking though? It's unhealthy. Sirius should quit soon. It's a bad example for anyone reading this fic.

But anyway... This chapter (the ending) has got to be my fav!
Rowena Stark chapter 10 . 10/15/2010
I love how their first kiss was. It's a very Eliza way of doing it. Good chapter and can't wait for the next one! )
okok123 chapter 10 . 10/15/2010
YES! That was excelent. I was staring at my computer screen, saying "AWWWW!" keep writing!
BlueXD chapter 10 . 10/15/2010
Aww! Eliza is just so cute! :) Rambles all the time!

Keep up the good work! :D
wildwriterrr chapter 10 . 10/15/2010
Sam Storsky chapter 10 . 10/15/2010
Great chapter!

Update soon please :)


SAM :)
arrandomness chapter 10 . 10/15/2010
yay! they finally kissed! this is a very good thing. i wish i could sleep til next friday so i don't have to wait throught the whole week for the next update.
Silver Scorpion chapter 10 . 10/15/2010
Hiiii! Oooh, this was a REALLY good chapter! It was really sweet, cute and funny! Loved-ed it! UPDATE ASAP!
kayelem chapter 10 . 10/15/2010
Yes, finally! I absolutely loved this chapter though I wish it hadn't ended so soon! :(

Update soon! :)
MrsHill3609 chapter 10 . 10/15/2010
Well it's about time. I almost thought I'd have to step in. Amazing chapter. Come on next Friday!
talyak chapter 10 . 10/15/2010
awwwwwwww that was adorable. I enjoyed that. XD
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chemistrygoddess chapter 10 . 10/15/2010
I love the awkwardness of Sirius in the beginning, I can definitely relate to doing something silly and being worried someone saw. You wrote that little scene well.

I was also SO happy to see Eliza kiss him, perfect!
Sesalina chapter 10 . 10/15/2010
I finally convinced myself that I had to write a review on this. (I don't review very often. especially not in english.)

I just love this story! I saw it on your profile after I read 'boyfriend' and decided to read it even though I normally flee OCs (there are just not enough good ones out there). But Eliza? I really like her character... she's just so bubbly

And Sirius is... well, Sirius. Nothing's better than a well-written Sirius.

Your style is awesome as well and every chapter leaves a smile on my face. Yet another reason to look forward to fridays :D