|Reviews for A Son's Rite of Passage|
| Guest chapter 5 . 5/24/2013
Is this story over? I can't believe it. It was one of the best stories I have ever read, and trust me I have read thousands of fanfiction stories! In my opinion you have agreat talent and you shouldn't leave it! Write some more stories and I will read them for sure
| Guest chapter 4 . 5/24/2013
Oh My God! That was ...hard! I have to tell you that you write AMAZINGLY.
But my mother language is Greek so English is not very easy for me to understand, so I didn't understnd totally how Edward's punishment was.
Nevertheless you deserve to know that you write superb!
| Guest chapter 2 . 5/24/2013
This is a very dark side of Edward! Nice work!
| Guest chapter 1 . 5/24/2013
It's very interesting! Very well written!
| Kateri3740 chapter 5 . 5/1/2013
Don't stop there! Please keep going! This is awesome, you cover their emotions so well, portraying Carlisle's emotions and thoughts as dad/coven leader so well! I just wish Edward had less of a temper!
| kalico chapter 5 . 4/11/2013
I would just like to say that I have so enjoyed reading your story and I do hope you can finish...Thanks for sharring this great story with us.
| bethian3 chapter 5 . 3/11/2013
Like your story . I hope you finish it.
| hippiemuse chapter 5 . 2/28/2013
This was a great chapter! Are you going to finish the story? You really have a great way with words and I hope you decide to write more chapters!
| the newest daughter chapter 5 . 1/20/2013
god I cant see Carlisle ever hitting his kids with a strap but i guess every parent gets pushed to their limits
| thailand 2012 chapter 5 . 12/30/2012
I would like you to finish this story too please. I have enjoyed the build up, what happens next?
| Kay chapter 5 . 12/15/2012
Great story please update soon
| rubyblue100 chapter 5 . 12/14/2012
Love your story, I keep hoping for chapter
| Guest chapter 5 . 10/11/2012
I love this! Please finish it!
| Guest chapter 5 . 10/2/2012
Please update soon
| Dixie.f.9 chapter 5 . 10/4/2012
Thank you for this chapter. I must admit I wish for more chapters but at least you did not leave us hanging. It was a really good story of both Edward and Carlisle realizing that for the most part Edwards mental maturity was in place, but sometimes teenage hormones can take over.