Reviews for Puppy Days
Ciradel Kronikankirjoittaja chapter 1 . 11/19/2013
Honestly... I can't imagine Tsume with a frying pan X) ...
Guest chapter 2 . 9/7/2013
I just want to read the story, not the author interjections, -they make it hard to read.
Guest chapter 1 . 9/7/2013
No it is spelled 'upon' not apon -dont worry it gets me too
Ciradel Kronikankirjoittaja chapter 2 . 8/20/2013
star sound chapter 3 . 7/22/2013
you could have Naruto buy a dog whistle -make an evil face with stars in my eyes-
Varun Dhawan chapter 3 . 4/26/2013
Fucking update...
Varun Dhawan chapter 1 . 4/26/2013
The thing i liked the most was your author shit _
Hylian Mage chapter 3 . 2/26/2013
Loving this story. Breaking the fourth wall is always hilarious! Keep up the good work!
Pholas chapter 3 . 11/28/2012
A really nice story I laughed a lot and of course its very cute I don't know why you don't write a shonen or yaoi story but even this is great!
Ali-Kun chapter 3 . 9/19/2012
weathersageK chapter 1 . 10/10/2011
uh oh looks like Kiba is going to learn the hard way that when you mess with the author of the story your in your gonna lose...badly

all in all great work with this chapter (it's a little short but I like it)

also I wonder what the bet was? (well I guess if I read I'll find out)
TheNinjaAlchemist chapter 3 . 8/23/2011
dude, come on, you haven't up dated scince January! come ON! :(
SpecialPikachu chapter 3 . 7/30/2011
I have some ideas to torture Kiba with:

* Kiba meet Kakashi's dog (I forget its name) and be a ninja's animal (well, I don't know the term in English, I rarely read Naruto, I only watched it in Indonesian television)

* how if a female dog fall in love with Kiba? hahahaha

Anyway, this is a super duper hyper funny story, please update it
SpecialPikachu chapter 2 . 7/30/2011
Ahahahaha you make me laugh so hard again..

Kiba is so funny. Naruto, please take good care of it "
SpecialPikachu chapter 1 . 7/30/2011
Hahaha your story is so funny...

I love all the comments you inserted. This paragraph is the best:

What was the bet? Um...I rather not tell you. (oooooh, everyone look! Kiba's blushing!) Shut up you stupid narrater. (Um, Kiba, in this fanfic you are the narrater. I'm the author.) So since I'm the narrater, you shouldn't interrupt! (But this is my fanfic!) Everyone listen to me and ignore enything that's in parenthesis. (HEY! That's not nice! Your gonna regret this!)

made me laugh so hard! ))
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