Reviews for Mass Effect: The Reclaimers
xThomas2 chapter 13 . 4/28/2015
Decently written
Guest chapter 3 . 2/21/2015
Shepard didn't know what it was, but the alien obviously thought it would help the pilot's injury. Still, he pulled out his biofoam canister and crouched down next to the pilot as well, only to find something a lot better than biofoam already in the wound. Whatever gel the alien had spread in the wounds seemed to be actually healing the wound. The blood had mostly stopped flowing; Shepard could see the bone of Joker's leg and the shattered bits of it from where the spike of metal had hit it.

The flesh inside the wound was literally knitting itself together.

Do you even know what medigel does? And the difference between medigel and biofoam?
Horizon Unsheathed chapter 13 . 2/16/2015
It is a severe shame this story is dead.
SmokeTinyTom chapter 3 . 10/14/2014
Type your review for this chapter here...
EffervescentNova chapter 13 . 6/1/2014
Even though this was before the revelations of the 'Forerunner Saga' and Halo 4 the story was still very compelling. I will be following on the off chance that you decide to pick it up again.

Your character development was good and the portrayals of each character and species was dead on as well.
EffervescentNova chapter 3 . 5/31/2014
Not counting the most recent revelations there are still problems with this chapter.

OMNI Gel is a human proprietary invention in the ME universe. AI choose their own avatar, the idea that they aren't able to change it doesn't ring true. Rampancy is the final stage before death, it is the dying throes of an AI. If her time was aproaching then surely bringing a replacement would've been a priority. If the ODP was still active why wasn't it used in the defense of Reach?

Many authors make the mistake of believing that because the covenant reached Earth that the covenant must've destroyed the remaining colonies, but this belief is erroneous unless you believe that human colonies followed a linear path. SIt would not be rational to colonize in such a way, colonies would be founded in roughly concentric circles with Earth at the centre.
FranticHamster chapter 13 . 11/27/2013
Good story to bad its dead
Guardian54 chapter 13 . 11/19/2013
Dude, are you still alive? UPDATE DAMMIT!
Greivious pridak chapter 10 . 9/14/2013
you should have Noble six on Reach
MyRandomName chapter 13 . 9/15/2013
After so much time you probably aren't likely to continue this story, but what you have posted is excellent and one of the best Mass Effect/Halo crossovers on this site as fare as I'm concerned
Samuez chapter 13 . 7/25/2013
Norrie chapter 12 . 6/17/2013
I doubt Covenant species would refer to themselves by human terms, Ex. Brute and Elite, rather than their proper names, Jiralhanae and Sangheili . Still a good story.
Norrie chapter 11 . 6/17/2013
A half an hour is thirty minutes, not fifty.
TheBleachDoctor chapter 13 . 1/17/2013
Sure, build the story up to the climax and then just abandon it. The least you could have done is put this story up for adoption or something.
rootthepsininja chapter 2 . 12/23/2012
Like the story and the how the first contact with the Council is during the Covenant war. But the part where Tali ejects the heat sink happens after the Geth leave there homes and attacked Eden Prime so she sould have to vent her weapon instaed.
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