|Reviews for Peder's Hawk and Miri's Fox|
| Guest chapter 3 . 11/6/2014
I know this is a crazy guess but does she wanna marry him? Oh and pleeeeeease continue this
| Guest chapter 2 . 11/6/2014
Oh wow! Loved it! If u want advice, don't ask me, cause I think ur writing is perfect as it is
| Guest chapter 1 . 11/6/2014
OMG love it brilliant amazing awesome
| MaraMania chapter 3 . 7/11/2014
| MaraMania chapter 2 . 7/11/2014
| MaraMania chapter 1 . 7/11/2014
| Guest chapter 3 . 5/17/2014
UPDATE PLEASE MAAAAHrlgsiSDFLDLSDKJFSEI:!
| abigail chapter 3 . 7/2/2013
Please update! You can't just can't leave the story like that I really have no idea what to tell Peder since they already know they love each other right? Oh and I reaally like this story the writing is similar to the real book
| Pinkmoon chapter 1 . 7/1/2013
Wish you would update...
| AinsleyWright chapter 3 . 5/11/2013
PLease update soon.
| PAPJOHOO chapter 2 . 5/7/2013
So u r both a pjo luver and a pa luver? U r my new BFF!
| blair the cat chapter 3 . 7/28/2012
I love it! I really hope you update it soon!
| elizabeth chapter 3 . 4/16/2012
miri:i like you peder
then they kissed
me:get a room
| miri fox chapter 1 . 4/11/2012
| Dakota Shadow chapter 3 . 4/5/2012
ummm... duh. it's a little overly stated that it's a 3 word sentance, using the words Love, You and I though not nessasarily in that order. personally i think he should tell her first.