|Reviews for Pyretic|
| Captain Isa Von Pickles chapter 1 . 8/20/2010
*shakes head* I always knew Roxas was the dirty one. I always knew it. *clicks toungue* But nobody EVER listens to me...
| LexXio02 chapter 1 . 8/17/2010
that was the best story i like it a lot
| Hannahble chapter 1 . 8/16/2010
Wow, I love it! I love how dazed Axel is, like he's so taken away by all that Roxas is that he can't even think straight, just going by instincts. It's a great contrast between his little uke:) 3 great writing!
| HeavenlyOoberries chapter 1 . 8/13/2010
Ahaha, I'm not used to reading present tense. Half the time I was reading in a sports-announcer voice in my head.
But seriously, very passionate smut and intense in its wordlessness. There should be more like this.
| FaunsRetreat chapter 1 . 8/13/2010
LOL, HOT as FUCK.
Which actually makes a lot of sense.
This wasn't bad at all. It was good, especially since most smut consists of laughable cheesy lines xD Good job!