Reviews for On my Mind
Guest chapter 1 . 7/26/2013
I really love your fanfic, 'Mable', really wonderful and heart touching. It's really sad that Pipsy was awfully upset when her relationship with Timber were really bad/nasty. It possibly that Timber has been only using her from the beginning. To me , he just made up that excuse to hurt Pipsy's feelings by telling her all these lies encluding the one that he has to take care of his sister so he rip the poor little mouse heart out and step on it... beside he didn't even have a sister( he was an only child). There is a possability that he went out dating another girl. I seen it all before from a movie I watch last weekend.

Pipsy is a sweet hearted, the little mouse never give up her true feelings for Conker. She loves him dearly since the beginning when they're five or six years old. Maybe one day she'll see him again for real and confess her love for him.

Can you make a fanfic about Conker who misses Pipsy pretty please.
Mijumaruwott chapter 1 . 10/28/2011
Very nice fanfic. Maybe you could do a companion fic with Conker from CFD when he's drunk out of his mind? ;)
Judas Cain chapter 1 . 12/10/2010
I liked it! I know it's just a one shot, but I think you should make a sequel.
Twilight Vestige chapter 1 . 8/15/2010
This was absolutely adorable, and I'm so glad I stumbled upon it.

I really liked how you used the passage of time here.

Also I'm curious: are the parts in bold song lyrics? Or something original?