Reviews for Mystique
Funstt chapter 20 . 4/13
Can you make the names English? Even a second version with English names would be awesome! Great story and yep I was dissapointed it wasn't an update haha keep up the good work team
Northwest Brony chapter 19 . 2/8
When I saw that the story updated, I was overcome with excitement! I have enjoyed every minute of this story, your way of making the action flow and the character development is absolutely wonderful. There are a few places where a word is missing, but the story is overwhelmigly good that I cannot help to ignore thise small flaws for the beauty and craftmanship of the entire story. I am waiting with anticipation for the next chapters with Hikari and Shinji, the transforming pokémon trainer.
Ravenstar556 chapter 19 . 1/2
Omg you've got me on the edge of my seat for when he might tell Hikari. Continue, please! :)
schoolmouse33 chapter 19 . 12/14/2014
NNNOOOO! She was so close to finding out! NNNNOOOO! *screams into pillow from frustration* Gosh where to begin, this story is amazing, I have read this thing in one sitting and have procrastinated on studying for my finals tomorrow, if I fail I blame you. Kidding, just kidding, this story was so good I couldn't stop reading up til the recent chapter. Now I'm screaming because it was so close to happening, SO CLOSE *makes gesture of how close with finger finger and thumb to show very little space* Enough with me blabbing like a moron, to summarize, this story is amazing, I'm freaking out, and you better update soon or I'm gonna have to fine you!
LovelyLily13 chapter 19 . 12/12/2014
Yaaaaay, an update! I'm so happy! Can't wait for the next one!
mednin chapter 19 . 12/11/2014
Cuute! I'm enjoying this story! I'm so happy you updated! Thanks for not ending on a cliffhanger if you think it might be a bit before you come back!

Good luck with everything and thanks for the update! :)
Ern Estine 13624 chapter 19 . 12/11/2014
getting really good can't wait formore
Crystal Winkle chapter 18 . 9/24/2014
Please do review as soon as you can.
boohoo TTuTT chapter 18 . 6/17/2014
aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!

where is the next chapter? i cant wait anymore!
Anya Ishikawa chapter 18 . 5/4/2014
Hey, awesome writer! Why haven't you updated this story? Why are you killing me with excitement? Do you even give a damn on how you're killing me with suspense right now? Please update and don't leave this story hanging, especially when Hikari knows or has an idea about the truth. I really want to know what will happen next and Im sure thousands of your readers too. Youve reached 18 chapters already. Sorry if im being so dramatic. God bless! Oh... and update your other story too. You know... the one with ninjas and Hikari pretending to be Hikaru XD
Meilong101 chapter 18 . 2/22/2014
keep going you are awesome
mednin chapter 18 . 12/8/2013
I LOVE this story! You can't stop it! D': Please update! This story is AMAZING! You've got TALENT!
Marionette of Wonderland chapter 14 . 11/22/2013
1) somewhat good, as it mostly sad and a biit touchy on subjects of Paul/Shinji X Dawn/Hikari
2) he seems to be...oh, Soul Eater Evans with a torso scar but on his back torso and in a different way if so
3) I dislike him very much, as he refused to listen to Paul/Shinji's luxio form. Thickened cranium is his head
4) two sides of a story. One raised to be a pawn, the other a walker of a dark road brightened by a mistaken miracle
5) make Paul/Shinji embarrassed and you see a "flavorful" result, in the words of a strange Cilan/Dento
6) Dawn/Hikari is a dreamer of sorts, so let her be the one to find reshiram/zekrom, whoever you chose, in a dream
Guest chapter 18 . 11/11/2013
Are you having a bad case of writer's block? Or has it just gone on hiatus? i just hope it's not discontinued...it's a really great story...
Guest chapter 18 . 10/26/2013
please update soon! i can't wait o see (well, read) what happens next!
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