Reviews for Zip My Lips
RedInkMagic chapter 1 . 8/17/2010
WHAT? I love it! But then, I hate my own writing too :P. So I know how it goes.
kammy147 chapter 1 . 8/14/2010
I am so glad I clicked and read this fic. It's great!

I love your writing, I love the part where they exchanged hats. Actaully I just love the whole thing, from beginning to end. I am serious! You should continue this fic!

Actually this chapter alone stands well as a brilliant one shot since you described Kyle's inner thoughts so light-heartedly yet with a tint of depression in the end by saying that pretence is not true love.

Stan's careless drunken speech is touching, I like how you throw in the detail about that episode when Kyle was going to die.
anon chapter 1 . 8/14/2010
Too much "cute"s and "adorable"s and girl talk. These are guys, not girls...
Archaic chapter 1 . 8/14/2010
Aw that was super cute :3

I don't think that your writing is crappy at all.

Another chapter would be awesome ;D

But if you don't decide to continue this story this could stand as a one-shot if you wanted it to. (Thought I hope you do continue it)
Neko-Kathy chapter 1 . 8/14/2010
This was cute! Would love to see more~