Reviews for The Ghost of Me
thewolf74 chapter 21 . 5/22
This story was very good...
Opalbrat chapter 21 . 8/16/2013
Love this!
mae-E chapter 21 . 10/13/2011
this was a cool way to end it. u thought that you had trouble keeping up with people now just wait till you add all of buffy's crew into the mix! lol

it is a shame that you didn't take neville's speech more from the movie. it had more of a chargeing pep up. which is what that moment really needed. but i did like how you had the rangers come out and morph.

I like how neville saved jason!

I liked the idea that they all threw in together to open a school and the name was in honor of their friends. I liked that even though it is hard work that the couples are battling it out and trying to make it work. (sorry i'm watching project runway while writing this.)

i thoguht that everthing went well in the final battle.
nandyroo94 chapter 21 . 10/13/2011
Great ending To a Great Story
Ghostwriter chapter 21 . 10/13/2011
Awesome story. I loved it. Great ending. Can't wait for your other stories. Catch ya on the flip side.
mae-E chapter 19 . 10/11/2011
a very cool chapter! but it is really sad that you chose to kill luna! :( and i find it interersting that you chose to save tonks. or even with treatment will she not survie her injuries?

i thought it was interesting that it took 2 tries to get to the room of requirement. so the teloprting was thrown off by the enchantments.

So what will the others think when jason tells them that harry is a horicux? and that they have to let voldermort try to kill him to destroy the horicux. will they be able to stand by and let it happen. or will they try to stop it?
Ghostwriter chapter 19 . 10/11/2011
Whoa. Awesome job, man. Great stuff. Catch ya on the flip side.
red neo ranger chapter 18 . 10/11/2011
Loved it keep it up
mae-E chapter 18 . 10/7/2011
this was a cool chapter! i liked the fact that the only reason jason fest up to his feelings was cause she walked in on the converstation.

i loved that you used the line from the movie about the plans never working. one of my favorite lines in the film!

the converstation between harry andtommy was quit interesting. My favorite part was when harry said about hermione that she might kill him before date him... found that utterly histrical!

and that at the end of the chapter, where tommy and kim thought they were having a private moment and it turned out that they were the entertaniment for the day. lol

the fact that you said they had a pillow fight was cute. :) i can see that. i'm glad that they had the chance to have a moment of happyiness and of peace in this turbulat time of greif and sadness and fighting.
Ghostwriter chapter 18 . 10/6/2011
Awesome job. Love it. Keep it up. Catch ya on the flip side.
nandyroo94 chapter 1 . 10/5/2011
dude i freaking love this and you no homo but it was amazing how you wrote this i could honestly see the charachters doing everything in this and i absolutely love tommy and harrys similarities with this
Ghostwriter chapter 17 . 10/4/2011
Oh, wow. Well, THAT just sounds suspicious. I don't trust it. Keep up the great work. Catch ya on the flip side.
mae-E chapter 17 . 10/4/2011
this was a cool chpater. i liked how you showed them trasporting out of the locked vault. that was cool. or how after apperating it took both zack and trini a few moments to regain their breath and their stumachs. lol i liked hermione's ever so causal comment of we got to do a better job comunicating that. lol

the patronus part was real cool! and very original.

that is news that will hit the team hard. having to distroy their mentor.

i liked how when jason and kat held hands it seemed to comunicate what they were afraid to put into words. I think that both having been tramatized in this war will help bring them together. they can talk things out together. it will help them deal with their ptsd that i'm sure they are both going to be suffering from. at least more so then the rest of the team.

i guess they don't know about harry then, but then again harry doesn't know himslef yet either.

the fight should be epic! i'm guessing that even though the basklisc is put a skeloton on the floor of the chamber, i would think the teeth are still venomus. if either were to fall or be knocked into it, it would most likely be the last thing they ever do.

looking foward to what is next.
Taeniaea chapter 16 . 9/27/2011
cool story
mae-E chapter 16 . 9/25/2011
this was a cool chapter! i like that you finally had them have an honest conversation about their feelings. that at least it is all on the table now.

It is strange that being so different gives luna enough of a change in perspevitve that she can really see the heart of matters. really see the truth in it all. that under all the craziness she actually quite wize. she kind of like one of those people you call an "old soul" if you know what i mean. :)

I like that her being the way she is, she was able to tell jason exactly what he needed to hear. and since it didn't come from his friends it might have more weight and meaning. because a friend will tell you something to try to0 make you feel better. but to hear it from a stranger it is easier to execpt it as truth. i know that sounds strange but it tends to be the way things turn out sometimes.

So i'm guessing that before they leave jason is going to apolgize to kim for his yelling?

I loved the idea about the teloporting! why didn;t they think about it sooner? So does that mean that when things all go wrong that they won't be using the dragon to escape? cause i kinda liked that part. or will it be that the rangers will teloport and harry and co. will use the dragon?

I would think that eventually that they all meet up at the school. i would be cool that when like in that scene in the movie when harry burst into the great hall in front of the school to confront snape, if he wads flanked by the whole ranger team!

so will you show jason being at kat's side when she finally awakens? will she be undamaged mentally from the torture of bellitrix? well in the case of being able to funtction? cause nobody lives thru something like that with out somekind of scaring mental or other wise. but they can help each other deal with their ptsd together. something that can finally bring them together.

so it should be intresting to see how things go in the vault. and who will be the one to discover the gemini curse on the items in the vault. either by knocking somthing over or by picking something up.

is is intersting to see them get the chance to chatch their breath and get the chance to take stock of themsleves and their sitchuation so far. so they know what kind of condition they all are in before they plundge foward with the rest of the fight.

one of the lines that i thought was histrical in the movie was harry's resopnse to hermione when she asks why they were going to go off without a plan.

It was interesting how you had harry tell tommy and kim that after the whole ministry of magic fiasco, that their faces were to well known for any kind of covert mission. :) i would think that it will be a shcok for the magic comunity or at least the death eaters to see the black and yellow rangers again after what happened at the former prision.

So after the war is won and all is said and done, will the rangers keep in touch with harry and others from the wizarding world? or will they leave that all behind them?

when it oomes time for harry to open the snitch will one of the ghosts in the group be adam and tayna? i mean they did die for the greater good? for harry in a way?

So what of their mentor? where is he to be hidden? will they bring him to the final fight? if he is turned into a horicrux is there a way to purify him or seperate him from that part of the soul and is done fore harry? or will one of the rangers have the unplesent job of killing him to distroy the horicrux? and if so what effect will that have on them all?

at the school during the final battle are you going to show jason having to battle goldar? that would be interesting to show him finally overcoming the monkey in the tin can! I would think that the appearance of him would freak out a lot of the wizarding comunity. did they brand him with te dark mark? or worse? do they just have control of his mind?
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