Reviews for Jaklin's Life Story
MikaHaeli8 chapter 1 . 8/15/2010
It wasn't a bad story overall, but it was really long and could have been split into several chapters.

Also, spelling and grammar really bothered me. "Nowhere" instead of "know where", lack of commas and capital letters where they should be and a new line for each new speaker, no matter what's going on. Take care with character names as well - "Keira" instead of "Keria".

Run your next story through a spelling and grammar checker before posting it, please.