Reviews for Left for Dead and Back Again
Kayla chapter 12 . 7/18/2014
Not bad i skipped the part when Ellis and Ziey where kissing in the fire... i read some though.
Making it better chapter 1 . 5/26/2014
Its ok but here is what it should go like. As Zoey watches the tank punch and fling Bill in the air, her heart sank deep. She knew he was dead and went back crying on the bridge. Francis and Louis tried to male her feel better, but she kept crying.

Few weeks later, a new group Zoey has never seen before approach ed the bridge. Ellis was the first to notice Zoey as his group chated with Francis and Louis. Ellis knew he was staring, but Zoey just sat back crying. What was she crying about? As Ellis wondered. He noticed Zoey looked over at a dead body that Ellis did not know who it was. Then Ellis was called over to the group and told to get ammo and kits. Ellis wondered why they were getting ready, then he knew. They were gonna get gas for the car and
Leave across the bridge.

After he fighting, right before Ellis got in, he looked over to Zoey and saw her still crying. Instantly, Ellis remembered he had a def. unit. He ran to the body and revived the old man. The man said,"What the hell is going on?" The man questioned Ellis. Ellis replied, "Not a whole lot of time to explain. C'mon, take my rifle amd get to that group there. The man did as so. After Ellis was just about to go in the car, he looked up and saw the man right behind Zoey. The, an replied, "What the hell did I miss?" Zoey turned aroud to see Bill alive. "BILL!" Zoey screamed. She ran to hug bill and was crying with joy. Louis said good to have you back man and Francis replied, "Great news. Your alive and im still handsome." Bill replied, "You all can thank a boy with a cap on and dirty yellow shirt with weird looking pants. All of them chated, but Zoey went to see Ellis and yelles, "Thank you so much!" Ellis just replied, "Sure thing." As Nick heard all that, he angrily yanked Ellis in the car and they drove off. Rochelle told coach that she saw a nice looking person. He knew it was Francis and they chated about him while Nick just kept yelling at Ellis for taking to long, bit Ellis didn't notice, for he was thinking about Zoey the whole trip of the car.

This is part 1 of something of this story.
jccaber chapter 1 . 4/29/2014
wow awesome
WitchL0v3r chapter 12 . 6/17/2013
Damn nice story
WitchL0v3r chapter 1 . 6/7/2013
L4D God bless you Louis.
artilyon-rand chapter 8 . 1/9/2013
hoo-leee shit
artilyon-rand chapter 7 . 1/9/2013
:)
artilyon-rand chapter 6 . 1/9/2013
By the Emperor
artilyon-rand chapter 5 . 1/9/2013
ok i m lovin this so far x3
artilyon-rand chapter 4 . 1/9/2013
kilililili
artilyon-rand chapter 3 . 1/9/2013
hell yeah
artilyon-rand chapter 2 . 1/9/2013
o.o
artilyon-rand chapter 1 . 1/9/2013
really cool
youngman34567 chapter 12 . 11/1/2012
whoo hoo luv that best story i eva read!
moonwolf123 chapter 12 . 7/25/2012
i like it alot wright more i will be looking forword to more
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