|Reviews for Toy Soldier|
| x-smith chapter 1 . 12/16/2013
This was great, I actually found it a while ago, I must have read it at least 20 times. I've read all three of your fma fics, and this one is my favourite. You portray the characters perfectly, and I love how you do Mustangs perspective on Ed. I keep checking your profile every few weeks to see if you've written any more of these. I hope you do some day, these are hands down the best fma fics I have found anywhere.
Thank you for sharing them!
| 0-mirage-0 chapter 1 . 5/22/2013
Very Very good. Enjoyable story. The cute bit of humor woven around such deep topics really made them shine. Any story that can display Edward as the child he is stuffed into the soldier cut out he needs to fill resonates well. Mustang was equally as well done. Overall your characterization was lovely, humor and drama well placed, and the flow was smooth. Thanks for the read, I will certainly check out your other FMA stories.
| arhangle chapter 1 . 2/12/2013
what can i say?it was very well written,amazingly ic, and was very .
| tsuki107 chapter 1 . 1/5/2013
Love it! I adore all your FMA stories :)
They're always so creative!
| mabidiso chapter 1 . 10/3/2012
How dare you take something so fundamentally horrendous and horrifying, scary enough to fill me with terror and angst for poor Edward, so freakin' funny I was choking on my own spit. Hot damn that was funny! Loved every single bit of it. Loved Mustang's thoughts as he tried to talk himself into plausible deniability. The state of denial is a much more comfortable place to be. Loved the flashes of insight and understanding and the moments when denial just couldn't work. Loved how he sees the two boys, especially Edward. Loved the contrast between the normal, mortal human local hero and the "gaudy" Edward, to bright and alien to be real. Loved Roy's musings on what happened and why. Such a freakin' great story. I also loved Al - his silences and yet his huge and real presence that could be especially felt through the effect he has on Edward and Roy.
| gaap237 chapter 1 . 9/20/2012
Loved it. I think it is interesting that you made Roy kind of paternal, yet not mushy.
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/24/2012
Excellent story. Loved the details and how it flowed.
| Golden Mean chapter 1 . 7/21/2012
Everyone's IC, there's a good plot, and no typos. I really like this story, and give it 10/10. If this seems like a brief review, it's because I haven't the words to express how much I enjoyed reading it.
| Do a Barrel Roll chapter 1 . 7/12/2012
Nice job. Super intense.
| HeartsDragon chapter 1 . 6/16/2012
Hahahaha I absolutely loved Roy in this! :)
Poor Ed. And Al.
Brilliant story, its interesting to see how people all view Ed being military differently...
| Meow chapter 1 . 1/27/2012
Amazing beautiful flawless . Loved it so well written great Job
| wishfulliving89 chapter 1 . 11/1/2011
very well written. good story.
| Guest chapter 1 . 10/29/2011
This story is amazing! I loved your characterization, especially of Ed and Roy.
| StrictlySomething chapter 1 . 9/17/2011
This is extremely well done. Definitely one of the best fics that is representing Ed's young age. I thought you're characterization of Roy was particularly good.
| flybynight00 chapter 1 . 8/16/2011
Loved this story when I read it on LJ, and am delighted to find it so conveniently awaiting favoriting on FF.