Reviews for Not Just Yet, but Almost
BelievingInMe chapter 83 . 4/8
Probably the 20th time I've read this fanfic and I swear it gets better every time I read it. Probably the fanfic I've ever read for any tv show or book or movie, I highly suggest reading this if like so many others you were disappointed with the way miobi ended. Also you should definitely read JCI's original works Game Set Match,
Ella3 chapter 83 . 1/24
Really live this story!
They are so cute together!
And you are so a good writer! :)
x.keepingthemoon.x chapter 80 . 6/29/2015
This is beautiful. Thanks for a great read :)
Isabel Prescot chapter 80 . 6/4/2015
Lovely story. Amazing narration of gymnastics competition even though you were worried about it being repetitive. Simply could not put this down. Took preloaded web pages on my iPad to work just so I could continue in breaks. Loved it. Thanks a lot for writing.
Isabel Prescot chapter 11 . 6/1/2015
Loving the difference of format in narrating the story that comes in the middle of normal chapters. First the commentary of Worlds and now the SI article. Very original and innovative. The story has a very intriguing plot so far as well.
StephiX1 chapter 80 . 8/21/2014
Words cannot describe how this story has left me feeling. A few days ago, I read your story Chasing Glory and was left utterly heart broken when I got to the final chapter. But reading this and seeing them get their happy ending was just so utterly moving and beautiful. I have laughed and I have cried through the whole thing, and even writing this review, I am a little choked up at the beauty of their story. Your Olympic chapters were phenomenal! I had the same heart wrenching feeling of anticipation reading them as I did watching the actual games themselves back in 2012. And giving Payson and Sasha the chance to be open about their relationship during it made it all the more magical. Never have a felt so connected to a couple. And I read this along side the outtakes, making the growth of the story all the more sweet. Google translate has also came in handy. You've also made me fall in love with the Romanian language.

You are an amazing writer. Thank you for creating such a beautiful story.
MakeItAGoodOne chapter 1 . 2/26/2014
This is literally my favorite fanfiction I've ever read! And trust me, I've read A LOT of fanfiction! I've read it twice! You're an absolutely brilliant writer. I feel like a real part of these characters lives! In fact, this is probably one of my top 20 favorite books! I know you're busy with your other book, but if you ever decide to write a NJYBA sequel, I'll be always grateful to you :)
Guest chapter 80 . 11/6/2013
I love Pay& Sasha, but what about Austin and Kaylie? They were so in love! It's a horrible thing for you to write that the day after they slept together, he dumps her.
Chelle04 chapter 80 . 10/16/2013
I loved your story. I even liked it better than the original show. I've read it many times, which is a rarity for me when it comes to fan fiction. I sometimes open it to a random chapter and start reading just like I do with a well loved book. I'm stilling holding out hope for a sequel (how else will I know what happened between Kelly and Austin,) but I finally broke down and read your book. I paid full price for it too. Also kind of a rarity for me. I was hoping to hate it because it was keeping me from being able to read the NJYbA sequel but unfortunately I liked it and now find myself waiting for yet another sequel. I've been told that I may have a reading problem;).
I tend to be a lurker but felt it was necessary to step out of the shadows if for no other reason that to tell you how much I enjoyed reading a fan fiction with the attention to detail and grammar that yours showed. I admire the way your story evolved in to something that could stand alone. ABC Family may have given you the characters and their backstory to play with but you made it something else entirely.
I'm off to attempt to sign up for your Christmas give away because who doesn't love some Payson/Sasha goodness on occasion. Thanks for not giving up on this story and good luck with your other original works. I hope to see much more from you in the future.
Anisky chapter 52 . 9/1/2013
I like Roy a lot. You voiced him really really well, which is hard to do with a young writer (I'm assuming) doing with an old man.

I wish we could have gotten that sequel with Julia, but it's so great that you got your original work published!
flutterbug chapter 80 . 8/31/2013
That was totally wicked! Captured the characters perfectly :-)
Shandriz chapter 83 . 6/29/2013
I loved this story and have read it several times. I think you wrote the characters really well. Your story is what brought me into the MIOBI fandom.
I also really enjoyed your novel Game. Set. Match. Which was definitely a great read and worth the money spent.
However I can't help but wonder if you ever plan to return and wrap up the many plots that began at the epilogue of this story. Every time I reread this story I find myself wondering what is happening next. Do you plan to continue with a sequel one day? If not perhaps a oneshot that wraps things up might be nice.

Kiwiflea chapter 1 . 6/16/2013
I just decided to reread this today, and find it sofunny that you were going to leave this as a one shot, especially because it ended up going to 80! I love it as a one shot actually, but I'm happy you kept going!
remuslives chapter 83 . 5/9/2013
That's so amazing! And that she wrote that about your book, very cool. Congrats! I'd love to check it out once I get some funds.
S.H.I.E.LD.13 chapter 83 . 5/9/2013
I've looked in all my local book shops, they don't have it. Amazon UK only have the kindle version :( any idea if it will be officially released in UK book shops?
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