Reviews for It All |
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![]() ![]() Great. Really hope this is continued even though its been a while. Thanks. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I found...'It All', from you pimping yourself in your A/N's in 'Insomnia'...since I fell in love with your Boyz in 'Insomnia' and 'Early Bird', I was intrigued and knew that I wouldn't be disappointed...I'm so glad that I followed your bread crumbs and I'm anxiously awaiting the reposting of 'It All' |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love their mutual magnetic force of attraction between Jasper and Edward...Both are strong and cocky men. It seems only...natural. Don't know if they are keeping their budding re-lay-tionship a secret. I'm sure that all the others are aware of their sexual orientation and that the obvious OOC distraction from the meeting, along with the eye-fucking they have been engaged in at the meeting table...all day, is a good indicator where BOTH their 'head's are truly at! Secret? Pishposh. Rita ;D |
![]() ![]() I love the characters and the story and am looking forward to it being completed. Pretty please. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story! I can't wait to read more. Grammar and spelling is good; story and plotline is easy to follow. Keep up the great writing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() just finished reading all 16 chapters, and like insomnia an early riser you're doing a magnificent job! I really really like your writing! can't wait for more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hi- just started reading your stories. Can't wait to read the next chapter. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I just want to say I am loving this story. I hope you update soon, I'm on the edge of my chair trying to anticipate what Riley is going to do next. I hope we don't have to wait much longer. |
![]() ![]() ![]() HEYYYYYY BB! I can't believe I hadn't left a review for this chapter! I went looking for it and didn't find it! I'm sooooooooooooooo fucking scared of what Riley may do now! Edward has nooooooo idea who he is dealing with! The boy is fucking crazy! Completely out of his mind! OH DEAR LORD! Or should I say OH DEAR SAM! LOL PLEASEEEEEE don't let Riley mess up with my Jay! OKAY, OKAY, with Jay! lol Riley was really naive to think Ed would give him any attention once he lost sight of Jasper...*shakes head* but then, he's nuts. We shouldn't expect him to have any common sense, right? lol Can't wait for the next chap bb! LOVE IT! LOVE THEM! Hugs and kisses! Dani |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh holy shit i hope jasper is going to be ok,people die from that is damn hot when he is pissed and i hope he finds edward please dont make us wait to long and THANK YOU for sharing your mind it rocks |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMG...Riley...he may as well keep on digging the hole he's already dug himself into. I'm so scared for Jasper's life now...what is Riley going to do to him? Please, please Edward...find Jasper before it's too late! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh god, Sam. This sounds bad, but you know what I mean: I've been dreading reading this! And I wasn't wrong! Oh, poor Jasper. Poor EDWARD! I can't wait for you to update. Well done. Nancy |
![]() ![]() ![]() gah! i feel like i'm on a pendulum with riley! one minute i'm thinking he'll do the right and help jasper and edward find each other but then he's s trying to get back with edward. and he fully acknowledges / realizes how in love they are and how serious their relationship is. omg, both edward and jasper are gonna kill him when they find out jasper's at riley's apartment. theyl never. elieve that eiley didn't drug jasper. no doubt jasper will slightly remember riley talking to him. i hope he comes to before riley gets back home. now i'm really hoping someone saw riley leave the club with jasper, i'm so pissed at how he talked to edward! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Damn, Riley is messed up! What will he do now? I can't wait to find out what happens next. Great chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Shit! Riley just keeps digging himself deeper and deeper into a hole! It sucks, because he *did* save Jasper, but of course Edward was going to lose his shit! Nervously dying to know what his next move is going to be *bites nails* |