|Reviews for The Prince of Pen Llarcau|
| Toaofwriting chapter 1 . 4/5
Well-written story. Will it continue?
| AdventuresInTheSueniverse chapter 1 . 10/30/2014
| CompanionWanderer chapter 1 . 8/17/2010
I was impressed by this way back when, and continue to be so, now. Such a very interesting premise, and I like how you opened it - the bit about the dream was not there when I read it. It introduces things very effectively.
Ellidyr is such a complete prat in the story it is hard to imagine him being close to anyone. The whole idea of his having a sister and their being mutually devoted to one another adds a layer to his character that is really fascinating. I am eager to see where you go with it, and how you develop her. Given their history, it makes sense she would be as deeply flawed, in her way, as he is. Any thought to what that is going to look like? Writing in first person automatically makes her sympathetic, so it is going to be a challenge.